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Hide-and-Seek

Sunday, July 6, 2003

Just a friendly little game of hide-and-seek. (NC-17)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6303    RATING: 8.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: The following snippet was written for fic challenge #13.

Hide-and-Seek
by
Tara LJC O'Shea

"...87...86...85..." River counted loudly, her hands pressed over her eyes from the centre of the cargo bay.

"River," Simon sighed dramatically. "I told you, I have work to do—"

"...78...77...76..."

"This is juvenile—"

"Kaylee's already hiding," she said, hands still over her eyes. "—55...54...53..."

"That's not fair! You're skipping ahead!"

"...37...36... You'd better hurry, Simon. 22...21..."

"That's cheating!" he called after her as he ran through the passenger dorm, scanning the area for a suitable hiding place.

"...14...13...12..." came River's sing-song voice as Simon ducked under the metal stairs leading up to the next level and tugged open the storage closet door.

"Hey!" Kaylee whispered as Simon wedged himself between her and the wall. "Find your own hiding place!"

"There aren't any other good ones—" he began, and she put a hand over his mouth.

"Shhhh! She'll find us!" she whispered, trying to peer through the crack between the door and the bulkhead. His eyes were starting to adjust to the dimness and he could make out the curve of her cheek in the gloom.

"Of course she'll find us," Simon whispered back against her fingers. "My sister is a genius who reads minds."

She started to giggle and buried her face in his shoulder to muffle the sound. Her s

Comments
Sunday, 06 July 2003 16:08
Whoa. Very steamy, very sexy, very shiny!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 July 2003 16:37
whoaaaaaaaa good fic
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 July 2003 18:19
BC

Oh, yeah.
Monday, 07 July 2003 05:14
Damn. That is really hot. That is very tremendously hot.

Is it awful to ask for a bunch more stories just like it? Cos... damn.
Monday, 07 July 2003 23:41
LOL! I don't usually read Simon/Kaylee stuff, but, gorramit! That was pretty good!

I loved River at the end. She is just great. ;-)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 July 2003 23:48
You know, on a smuggeling ship, you'd think there'd be more places to hide . . .

anyways, very cute
harri
Wednesday, 31 December 2003 20:21
awesome!!! ^-^ Very good!!!! ^-^
Tuesday, 20 July 2004 15:50
oooh kaysex! lol jk but very nice.
PS do you have to use "hardend nub"?
why noit say nipple?
MAIMAIJAYNE
Wednesday, 28 July 2004 04:30
my likey. i could see that happen on Serenity
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 August 2004 01:04
And how could it have been any nicer, I ask you? Very sexy, very funny, very gorram good. Thank you for the diverting read.

-Roving Eye
ROGUEDEMONHUNTER
Wednesday, 22 September 2004 07:22
woah, steameh! And I loved the end! lol, River is great!
Monday, 04 April 2005 18:21
One word: DAMN!

I've read this several times and I still love it. Very well done!! =o)
Sunday, 14 August 2005 16:12
i wonder if there's a fugitive doctor hiding in my cupboard...?
Sunday, 23 October 2005 04:41
Second time I've read this and the moisture index was quite high both times. Only reason it ain't a 10 is I wish it'd been longer. Got more? After all, there's loads more positions to try and loads more places to try them in. lol @ bellona and the doc in the cupboard. Don't we wish! And I loved River lying on the couch, hair spread, tendrils touching floor. Nice image. The whole gorram thing was one shiny image. Give us more, I say! And step on it!
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 23:25
Shiny but not long enough! Love the urgency and the position....Must write more!

Just lovely.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 February 2006 18:28
WOWZERS... I think I'll be in my bunk lol. This was a cool story. It really portrayed the characters as they are, and it was definitely hot hot hot!

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