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Sleeps in Elysium

Friday, September 26, 2003

River could be bounded in a nutshell and think herself a queen of infinite space.

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Author's Note: For the ff_friday challenge #22 (dreams)

Sleeps in Elysium
by Tara LJC O'Shea

She helps her mother clear away the dishes from supper. Usually, Jian would do it—but she's gone to Tiantán because her mother is ailing, and so it's a rare moment for the women of the Tam family to see what it is like to scrape leftover lamb and ginger from the platters and into the reclamation bin themselves. They laugh as they stack the glasses and plates in the kitchen which sees a great deal of use, but none of it by their hands.

Her mother knows how to cook, but she never does it. As they slice the mango and arranged it on the delicate china plate with the cheese, she tells her daughter that there are so many more important things for her to do, than spend even a moment in tedious drudgery if one could avoid it. It's a privilage that she's glad she can afford her children.

They carry the tray into the dining room, where her father and brother sit, drinking New Canaan brandy and laughing. She sets it down next to the girl lying on the polished wood surface. The girl stares at the ceiling, unmoving, unblinking as her brother used the delicate laser scalpel to peel back the spongy pink and grey layers of her brain while he told them all about the camping trip to the preserve on Iona he'd gone on last week with Ren and his cousin.

She takes a slice of apple from the tray and uses her fingers to pile white and green cheese—she knows the green veins were mold, but she likes the way they tasted—onto the

Comments
Friday, 26 September 2003 20:50
I really like the description of her dream and how it all goes horribly wrong. Very atmospheric. She's always been a character I couldn't quite get to grips with, nice to see you're doing better with that than I did.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 27 September 2003 18:24
I love this story. River's the most complicated character, and you handled her and the dream so well. This fic was super-shiny.:)
Monday, 29 September 2003 16:44
Is it okay to say the beginning was very scary? I got chillbumps from the familiarity of the writing. I read this that River's just become accostomed to the nightmares and that's just as scary as the bad dreams themselves. And having Book *understand* like that is also pretty creepy.

I'd also like to know, for no good reason, if you mean for the title to be ironic or tragic? Or is it more scary? If that's River's Elysium--a nightmare where she's spending time with her blue-gloved family-- the scariness compounds.

Octofrightening and wonderful.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 16 October 2004 10:36
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BELLONA
Thursday, 08 September 2005 16:26
uh-huh, sounds like a normal night at my house...
Tuesday, 05 December 2006 15:27
this is so incredibly beautiful. Truly, truly gorgeous writing. The slip-slide of time and space during the dream, the description of River's movement through the ship...

I'm all a flutter:)

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