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The Guns of Yamenmiao (Pt. 16)

Monday, September 22, 2008

The Old That Is Strong - Book 1, Part 16. The crew reaches the end of the line, only to find out that the confrontations - and the mystery of the ghost train - are by no means finished.

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Two parts to go!!! I may finish this beast yet. But not without reader responses.

AMDOBELL, I revised the previous part as seemed appropriate. Hope it meets with your approval second time around.

Angellemarcs, thank you for all!!! I'm kinda bummed, actually, that there was too much quick-moving plot going on to explore Kaylee and Robert's past relationship a little deeper. It's one of those deep dark corners of the human heart tha nobody should get to know too well. But there was a notion recently about special features....And there'll be other fics to come! :D Just....need to....write them. *ahemhem*

Jane0904, hehe, thank you for catching the Dr. Horrible joke. I was wondering about that for a split. ;) The epilogue might be a little while in coming since I've a bit of work to do yet on the M/I grief. Gonna get it right this time. Dammit.

Katesfriend, sure it wasn't too much of a deus ex machina? ;) Hehe, thank you. I just wonder how heated the M/I conversation should be.

Keep on chuggin', we're almost to the end....

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=20906>Part 15

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"QJ Seventy-eighty-seven callin' JS One-forty-two, over."

It was almost by reflex that the engineer on the Pecola yard switcher reached upward to grab his radio mike from the bulkhead behind him. "Rob!" he exclaimed. "Dispatcher's been tryin' to raise you for hours, man. We's wonderin' if you was ever gonna make it here."

"Well, I got's a little surprise package from Red Rock Junction." There was a perceptible smile in Robert's voice on the radio. "Okay to come in?"

"Yep, Beck's got you lined up for the east siding. Hey, what's this about you runnin' helper on NJ-oh-six? They got two QJs, they ain't over tonnage."

"Well, next time Benny tells a ghost story, we might oughta listen." Robert's cryptic response left the engineer struck without a word, himself and the fireman staring across the cab wi

Comments
Monday, 22 September 2008 16:05
Concluding but not ... I'd love to see the look on the general populace's faces when the Lickey Banker appears. And I can't wait to see what happens next!
Monday, 22 September 2008 22:10
Fabulous! I really love what you did with this part and how sweet Kaylee was to Robert, and that young man missing the Captain and crew of Serenity even before they went off on their merry. I am all curious though as to what is in those crates if not coin. Look forward to your conclusion. Great work, Ali D :~)
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Tuesday, 23 September 2008 00:15
Consider me STILL on the edge of my seat! (It's like I'm watching SW:TESB for the buhjillionth time. ;))
Tuesday, 23 September 2008 03:16
You've left a lot of unanswered questions so you'd better get back to writing. Loved Mal defending Robert as one of his own.
Tuesday, 23 September 2008 10:42
I love the ending with Kaylee and Robert. Who knew you could write sweet? LOL!! I also liked the silent exchange with him and River. Very cool!! Well, ready for conclusion, kind of. I wish it would continue, but all good things must come to an end.

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