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The Guns of Yamenmiao (Pt. 13)

Monday, July 21, 2008

The Old That Is Strong - Book 1, Part 13. Mal's cover is altogether blown, and he must figure out how to keep the mission from going south - but he has only one dangerous way to get the word out.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3967    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Well, folks, it goes without saying that I'm in pretty bad shape right now. However that ain't gonna make me leave you hanging for a week or more without an update or some responses. As River said in the last post - which, apparently, several of you appreciated - I think I can, I think I can, I think I can.

Soooo....

PhyreLight, what makes you think you get blamed for everything? I'm just making a little merry, is all. God knows some merriment is badly needed now, and this time I have a hell of a lot more to thank you for than just beta work.

Angellemarcs, thanks - any River cuteness I can insert, in it goes. (Okay, I know 'River cuteness' is redundant but there it is.)

Jane0904, I saw you left a comment right before the site went Reaver and ate it. As I recall you also said something about River quoting 'The Little Engine That Could'. Can't remember what else you said, but whatever it was, thank you. You're most helpful keeping this thing in the air.

AMDOBELL, truth to say, I have been a little worried lately about infusing the fic with too much technical detail. Fortunately this should be the last of it for awhile. Unfortunately I never did get my steam engineer ticket before leaving my last job, but have since found that running a steamer is like riding a bike in more ways than one (amongst them, much much less pollutive than a diesel :P).

MDRLTC, *sigh*....I didn't even think of that. What I did think of, though, was an actual occasion when I moved a tank car that had been sitting out in the open and exposed to the elements for about that long. But thank you for enjoying it despite the inaccuracies. As to the bit with Book's breviary, yes, that was sort of a generic reference to a prayer book.

Katesfriend, don't get too used to the tension because I'm about to amp it up again. This is going to be the kind of post that, if televised, my mom would be unable to watch. Thank you for sticking by; you, too, are really helping

Comments
Tuesday, 22 July 2008 09:59
Holy crap! Very exciting but Damn that Carabella for using Inara (AND the shuttle) to steal a march on our heroes. I'm just hoping that Wash manages to get Ray to have a really good welcoming party at the other end. I worried like *diyu* way back in the story when Inara confided in Carabella in the first place but it seemed yelling at the computer for her to keep her mouth shut didn't work! LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next, I am loving this story. As for your fear that there was too much technical stuff in it for the running of the train etc no, don't agree, those details just added authenticity and made it all the more realistic. Bravo! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me!
Tuesday, 22 July 2008 15:38
Who says *I* wasn't making a little merry? (Brandybuck? No, FUN!)... Yeah, okay. I just read a post from Joss, so I'm a very Jossian mode right now. :p

And, as always, you're welcome. ;)
Tuesday, 22 July 2008 17:25
It's going to take a week for me to catch my breath! Wonderful feeling of speed, and I could hear the wind whipping past my ears as Simon tried to jump into the shuttle. I was coughing along with him! As for Inara and Carabella ... I echo Amdobell's comment!
Tuesday, 22 July 2008 22:03
I think Wash had the best line in this one with being afraid not of dying, but breaking his neck and living. I love your Wash, and how you bring him to life. Poor Simon - glad he's got River to look after him. And you had me convinced, due to the excruciating detail of it, that Zoe was going to slip and fall getting back below, so I was very relieved when she ended up safe in her nonplussed Zoe way. But quite a cliffhanger you left us with. When's more? Writing is good therapy for you and us both!
Wednesday, 23 July 2008 00:25
Great bit of action with Simon and the shuttle jump. Loved the first line by Wash. I think breaking my neck and living is not okay. :)

Great job, my friend.
Wednesday, 23 July 2008 00:25
Great bit of action with Simon and the shuttle jump. Loved the first line by Wash. I think breaking my neck and living is not okay. :)

Great job, my friend.
Wednesday, 23 July 2008 02:56
Ok. I don't think that joke I made in my first comment made all that much sense. NM.

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