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The Guns of Yamenmiao (Pt. 14)

Wednesday, August 6, 2008

The Old That Is Strong - Book 1, Part 14. Mal has a trainload of destruction behind him and a passel of violent criminals ahead, holding Inara hostage. With no backup, how can he emerge victorious without destroying himself and his crew?

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Okay....Dude. I'm a full week and a half behind schedule, I know. Had a really bad time a couple of weeks ago before a very happy development in my personal life turned things around 180 degrees. But meanwhile I have to post this in like four different places today to get it back on track (no pun intended). FFF first!

AMDOBELL, thank you for a very encouraging note. I myself worried like *diyu* about too much tech-y stuff before I realised that it was going to come in very very useful in this post.

PhyreLight, don't worry, I got the joke. Sorta. Unless there was an ulterior meaning. ;)

Jane0904, thanks so much! I don't know if I'll be able to pace the rest of the story quite like that, but, well....I leave that up to you.

Katesfriend, indeed about Wash! He needs more leaf-on-the-wind, big-damn-heroical moments and I was happy to oblige him. Sorry for taking so long to update. Also sorry to say that I'm sort of the Cliffhanger King when a story approaches its climax, and this post is no exception. ;)

Angellemarcs, thank you, thank you, thank you. Wacky site provided a double dose of commentage....hehe! I was a little fretsome about that shuttle jump and whether it came off well. Thank you for putting those fears to rest.

By the by, I thought some of you might like a visual reference, and this is as good as it gets:

, Chinese steam trains in high-speed action. There's also a familiar name on screen at the beginning. ;)

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=20724>Part 13

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Every muscle in the cab froze, every head snapped in Mal's direction and every eye bored into him. None had heard him spit Carabella's name over the bellow of the hard-working engine, but his harsh curse had made the name unnecessary. Kaylee's face was a mask of terror as she looked at the shuttle, parallel to the train and pacing, now a hostile craft with Kay

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Wednesday, 06 August 2008 20:20
Brilliant! So pleased to see another chapter and I love how you are keeping the tension ramped up. You would think Kaylee had learnt to trust her Captain by now but I can so see her acting just like this at the notion that something might happen to Inara and thinking Mal is doing nothing to rectify that. Very frustrating that Corsetto left it so late before arranging back up that he couldn't get any because Carabella had beaten him to it. What an idiot that man is. Look forward to the next part. Ali D :~)
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Thursday, 07 August 2008 12:16
Great chapter. I admit to a bit of curiousness as to why Mal hasn't just explained his plan to everyone, instead of talking to Kaylee and Robert seperately ... methinks not all of them are going to like the fulll overview! And great guns with the tension - I feel like I'd whistling down the track with them!
Thursday, 07 August 2008 22:45
Such a great chapter. Hope Mal's plan works.
Saturday, 09 August 2008 02:36
Another thrilling adventure and some very clever plot devices to ensure your cliffhanger is properly hung. Loving the adventure and Kaylee's snarky attitude. I'd love to know what Mal's plan is too. Write faster! Zoe never misses a thing and River is appropriately creepy. You captured the flavor well of Mal being the planner of these adventures.

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