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The Guns of Yamenmiao (Pt. 10)

Monday, June 23, 2008

The Old That Is Strong - Book 1, Part 10. The train has been found, the plan has been made, and Mal and the crew are all set to head out and put it into action - before an unexpected hitch forces them to act far faster than hoped.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4144    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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WELL!!!!! CSTS was ruttin' AWESOME - we had a terrific time, our fan film came off great, and we had, I think, over 500 participants! So, exhausted and elated though I am, I just can't bear to leave anyone hanging. ;) So here's some responses!

Angellemarcs, awww - that's sweet of you to say. And whaddya know, it's Monday - which means MOAR!!!! Omnomnomnom.

PhyreLight, is that perchance a commentary on how the posts read when you get them? ;) Hee hee. Thank you, as always.

Jane0904, thank you, VERY much. I think a bit of description is vital in a fic like this and it's very pleasing to know it works. Here's hopin' you're okay with the exit strategy. :D

Katesfriend, boy, am I glad you're continuing to read and enjoy this. Nope, I didn't include River just to prattle about the train....she had a key role to play in all this....hee hee. How sad would we have been if she hadn't gotten to play it? ;) And how, indeed, are they going to get out of this mess in all its eventualities? Still workin' it through.

AMDOBELL, heya!!!! Welcome aboard!! :D Great to see you along for the ride! Thank you, thank you - I really was hopeful that River works well in this part and I'm pleased that you think so.

Oh-KAY! Let's get on with the venture, shall we? (Yes, I'm still highly bibbledy about CSTS. ;))

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=20528>Part 9

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The sky was still clear and black as pitch at Janus City's midnight hour: Roma had no moons, leaving naught but starshine to define the outlines of the ships moored in the spaceport. None were discernible until the shuttle, with Wash's night navigational talents under unusual duress, came in low over the main thoroughfare. Then two by two the ships loomed, themselves phantomlike, from the darkness on either side of the shuttle: Wash might almost have missed Serenity, half hidden behind a bulk freighter on the east side of the thoroughfa

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Monday, 23 June 2008 13:58
"PhyreLight, is that perchance a commentary on how the posts read when you get them?"

Oh, please! You know I think this fic is still flippin' awesome even before I take my little pen to it! ;)
Monday, 23 June 2008 14:34
Wonderful as always!!

Liked Kaylee going with the big boys....she has a great backbone when she wants to.

As always can't wait for the next installment. :)
Monday, 23 June 2008 21:15
I am all kinds of anxious that there might be an *unwelcome* welcoming committee waiting for them. Was all kinds of amused at Mal thinking he might lose Kaylee to a steam engine. Not a chance. Other workings might draw her eye but her true love is Serenity. Plus if she left she would be leaving Simon behind as well! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me!
Monday, 30 June 2008 07:49
Amdobell is right - Kaylee would never leave Serenity. She might consider having a brief affair with a steam train, but that would only be for the sex. For a long term relationship it has to be a Firefly.

As for the rest, excellent descriptions and good tension.
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 00:22
Loved River's technical expertise on the solution, but really enjoyed Mal's response to her hunter/river analogy. Wonderful detail here and love the irony of Inara getting them a job with the bad guy. Oh, yeah, loved you in CSTS too!
Sunday, 06 July 2008 05:58
"'So tell me somethin' I don't know,' Jayne said sarcastically, shrugging.

"Wash's cagey answer came equipped with a sidelong glance. 'You just spilled a big glob of tomato sauce on your shirt,' he said."

I love Wash. And, Jayne scrubbing away at his shirt a is pretty fun visual.

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