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Three short fics about Zoe and Mal

Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Three short preseries fics because Slumming was kind enough to say she'd like to read more. And because I love Mal and Zoe. Three because they're too short to post alone.
(Knows she is supposed to be writing Simon.)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2864    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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THE CORPORAL

Why did Zoe remain a corporal? This was written for my pal and corporal Hez because she is such a sucker for that line.

He bolted to his feet the moment he saw her push aside the flap and exit the distant Command tent.

“Gorramit, Reynolds, sit down!”

“Later.” Mal shook off the medic’s grip and fairly charged out of the med tent, striding across the dirt of the makeshift compound, meeting her halfway.

“Zoe?”

“Sergeant.”

Tzao gao. Her face was standard Zoe unreadable, but her greeting… she’d addressed him by rank, rather than the usual honorific. Tzao gao! He’d lost her. Not that he hadn’t expected it. Hell, it was surprising they’d lasted as long as they had.

“You should be getting that seen to.” She pointed to the shrapnel gash on his forehead, her own right hand and wrist freshly bandaged.

“Later.”

“Gonna leave another scar in the collection.”

“Long as I’m still pretty.” He spoke the rote answer without hearing it, trying to size her up. She was evading the issue. Worse, then, worse than he had thought. Son of a bitch. Any time, it seemed, any time in this gorram war when something went right, it got taken away. “Zoe---”

She started walking and he automatically moved with her.

“Who is it? Hicks? You going with Hicks?”

Her expression revealed nothing and he pressed on, struggling through the inventory of names on the call-up sheet he’d pilfered.

“McGrath? God, he’s a worthless slug. I’ve met some of his boys. Choi? ‘Cause I hear he ain’t too bad…”

She was looking straight ahead as they walked, wasn’t going to give him so much as a gorram morsel. He knew times like this she was working on the way to say something and it was best to wait her out, but he wished she’d answer already. Truth be told he was feeling a little lightheaded, almost feeling a need to sit rather’n match those long strides ‘til she spilled her news. Maybe the new corporal’d

Comments
Wednesday, 20 February 2008 00:57
I absolutely ADORED this! The voices were so true and it made perfect sense when Zoe explained why she didn't take the promotion. And I loved to bits when Mal asks Zoe how come he's the Sergeant and Zoe deadpans "You're prettier, Sir". ROTFLMAO at that one. And then the last snippet showing their first days on Mal's new old boat, I could so see each of those scenarios and love them all. You have a gift for this and I can't wait for more! *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 20 February 2008 02:24
Wish I could give these higher than a "10" because they are wonderful. You show the bond between these two so well, and you show a side of Mal that only Zoe knows and Kaylee suspects. The last ficlet with Zoe's cough was especially evocative of how hard things were when you've lost a war and everything else but each other. Sigh. I know you should be writing about Simon, but could we please have some more homespun?
Wednesday, 20 February 2008 03:13
Thanks AMDOBELL and Katesfriend, you guys are the best. I was just on a Firefly jag, and as I've had no time to write up anything new, I felt the need to play with these ones. Katesfriend, I think you know I have one more Mal and Zoe story. Maybe I'll post it in a few days, I don't want to clog up the board. These make me want to write more. Maybe Zoe and Mal will talk to me sometime soon.
NINA
Wednesday, 20 February 2008 03:54
Ooh, I absolutely loved these fics. We don't see enough about Mal and Zoe in the war as far as I'm concerned, and these are some of the best friendship fics I've seen. I love 'em - and yes, I do hope you write more of these two. ;)
Wednesday, 20 February 2008 08:44
This is love. Not the romantic kind, with slopping kisses and mooning around, but two people who know each other inside out, have seen the worst, seen the best, and care more about each other than anyone could ever imagine. Together forever. No wonder Wash was insecure!
Wednesday, 20 February 2008 13:32
Beautifully done! Thank you so much for posting these. I'm glad I asked, and now I'll ask again. More, please! :D
Thursday, 21 February 2008 00:54
This was great. I especially like the last story. There needs to be more Mal and Zoe.
Sunday, 24 February 2008 21:55
I luvs me some Mal and Zoe, so this was a delight!

In 'The Corporal', it is illuminating seeing Mal insecure about losing Zoe to something so mundane as a promotion, and of course, her lower rank certainly requires an explanation. I am always tickled by Mal-as-difficult-patient, and, in my mind, the gash on Mal's head lines right up with the scar on Nathan's, which makes me happy.

I am totally in love with 'Sodboot'... A small and simple moment, Mal as who he was, but also Mal as who he is. The essence is the same, just the dirt that's missing. And Zoe there, knowing. Their interactions are perfect.

In 'Tea for Zoe', I love the way that cough calls them both back to their time post-Serenity Valley, naturally and meaningfully, and highlights their past and current struggle. And Zoe giving him a hard time always cracks me up.

You have wonderfully captured the essence and evolution of their relationship here. Thanks so much!

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