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Snowball - Chapter 11 The Conclusion

Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Life on Hawthorne will never be the same, now that our BDH’s have escaped.

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Summary – Life on Hawthorne will never be the same, now that our BDH’s have escaped.

If you haven’t read the whole thing, I would recommend going back to - http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=19146

Of course - Its Joss’s world and his characters, but I sure am enjoying playing with them.

Thanks to Mal4prez for all her time and effort, reading, coaching and encouraging.

I have really enjoyed sharing this with all of you, thanks for all the great comments.

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Chapter 11

“Lieutenant?” asked the young desk clerk in the primly starched uniform, holding out a brown expanding folder wrapped in elastic that looked as if it was stuffed full with documents. “This arrived by special currier.”

Lieutenant John Savage, chief of detectives over the homicide division at the Hawthorne Central Enforcement Agency, reached for the packet of papers, removed the elastic and opened the package. “What kind of currier?” he asked dryly after glancing briefly at the title listed on the topmost article and reclosing the package.

The desk clerk shuffled his feet as he answered, “Delivery service from the print shop on Second Avenue, sir. Seems this information was sent in via the cortex with special instructions for it to be printed and hand delivered to you personally. You have to sign, sir.”

The desk clerk handed him a signature pad, which he signed without hesitation. An event of this sort was unusual, but not unprecedented. Occasionally someone wanted the homicide division to have certain information, but did not want to be responsible for providing it, particularly when the implicated party was well connected and well known for the removal of obstacles. Unfortunately, information received in this manner was incorrect as often as it was accurate. Either way, all information received without a proper trail of discovery was illegal to use for prosecution. The information in this packet would have to be verified and, if truthful, rediscovered. Even so, rediscovering things is ea

Comments
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 13:24
Oh, I like this, even as I'm sorry it's ending! And the delivery of the papers to the Feds *after* they went to the news agencies - inspired! And the crew get to have some fun with the snow left from the avalanche - aahh. Well done!
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 14:30
Fun ending to a very fun, fast-paced story!
EBONWOLF
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 14:36
What a great story. My appologies that I didn't comment on the other chapters. I've enjoyed every chapter, well written and lot's of fun.

Thanks for sharing
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 20:21
Oh, I'm sad. It's all over! You have another one in the works, right? RIGHT?!

Nicely done and paced. And they even had some snow left to play with in the end . . . !
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 02:15
Loved how you brought this to a happy conclusion -great story!

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