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Snowball - Chapter 3

Wednesday, December 26, 2007

Our hero’s deliver their cargo, only to run into some unexpected complications. This is the third of eleven chapters. You can find out all about it in my blog.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3184    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Set six months after the BDM, with standard pairings: Simon and Kaylee, Mal and Inara angst.

If you haven’t read from the start, I would recommend going back to chapter 1 - http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=19146

Of course - Its Joss’s world and his characters, but I sure enjoy playing with them.

Thanks to Mal4prez for the wonderful beta type advice and thanks to my wonderful husband for catching more typo’s than there are planets in the verse.

Thanks to all the folks who took the time to leave me such wonderful comments. They make me want to write even more…..Does that make me a comment slut?

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Chapter 3

Kaylee quickly shut the airlock door. So much for opening the doors to let in some fresh air, she thought. It was as cold as deep space out there. She shivered at the thought of all that cold air filling up Serenity. They’d have to turn on the engine just to heat up the ship; what a waste of fuel.

Just the same, she stared out the airlock’s one tiny diamond shaped window. Outside, the Shelton Docks were covered with a blanket of new fallen snow making everything look clean and fresh. However, even Kaylee knew it would not remain that way for long. She counted at least six factory sized smokestacks in the general vicinity. Most of the houses and buildings seemed to have wood burning stoves as well. It would not be long before all this snow was covered with a thin layer of black soot.

It amazed Kaylee that the cold did not stop the hustle and bustle of commerce in the area. Back home, when the weather got harsh, everyone hunkered down inside their warm houses unless they absolutely had to go somewhere. On this planet though, people were everywhere, all of them dressed in thick boots and puffy down coats. Even here, near the planet’s pole, where the sun gave only a dim hint of light during the middle of the day, people went about outside conducting their business. Remembering the map she had seen, it occurred to her that most of the green zones were i

Comments
Wednesday, 26 December 2007 19:59
With the holidays and all, I blew it and did not stick to my self imposed posting schedule. So here's chapter three, a bit late but hopefully worth the wait. Now that there are no gifts to wrap and big formal type dinners to prepare, I plan to work very hard at getting back to posting every three days.

I hope everyone had a very merry holiday, full of good cheer and happy times.
Wednesday, 26 December 2007 20:53
Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this story - and it was worth the wait =) Cheers!!

Keep flying ;)
Wednesday, 26 December 2007 21:30
I really enjoy all the details you put in! Kaylee's engine talk, the mentions of her family, Striker and Hayes' personalities and real life complications. It has that Firefly texture of real life... only on a space ship LOL!

And now we have the inevitable complication for poor Mal to deal with. Wee! Fun fic.
Thursday, 27 December 2007 00:18
This was a great chapter! I love the little details you put in. And the snow 'cats'! The technical bits were just excellent!

Interesting little twist that you have Simon upset about Kaylee just doing her thing. He'll have to trust her, and she'll have to trust him, if their relationship is going to work. Hope you have them talk about it at some point and not just avoid each other! Have River throw some snowballs at them, cool them down a bit . . . LOL!

I've been wondering how you were going to keep Serenity on the planet for a few days, this new little wrench gumming up the plans is going to work really well!

So - you were late in posting, does that mean we get a new chapter earlier than 3 days from now? :)
Saturday, 29 December 2007 04:04
Lots of good descriptions of the goings on - getting more interesting all the time.
Tuesday, 08 January 2008 18:29
This is my favorite part of any Firefly/Serenity story, where the crew gets put between the rock and the hard place and it's anyone's guess how they might react! I love this stuff, and you're writing it well so far.

Thanks for sharing!
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