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Snowball - Chapter 9

Sunday, January 13, 2008

High tech video surveillance catches up with our hero’s causing no end of problems. This is the ninth of eleven chapters. You can find out all about it in my blog.

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Set six months after the BDM, with standard pairings: Simon and Kaylee, Mal and Inara angst.

If you haven’t read from the start, I would recommend going back to chapter 1 - http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=19146

Of course - Its Joss’s world and his characters, but I sure enjoy playing with them.

I need to give many rounds of thanks to Mal4prez for the wonderful beta type advice.

My thanks also to all the folks who took the time to leave me all the fluffy comments.

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Chapter 9

“What do you mean you haven’t found him yet?” Mrs. Cassandra Tam-Osan demanded of the head of central security of the Cottonwoods resort. “It’s been two hours since I reported his presence to you. I know that you have called in the extra support of central enforcement, because not only did I see them arrive, but I have already been questioned. Yet, somehow Simon Tam is still not in your custody. Explain!”

Sergeant Jeffery Simmons, retired from the central enforcement agency and now chief of the Cottonwoods Security Department, chose to examine the bank of monitors along the northern wall of the room rather than look directly at the woman currently scolding him. Days like this made him suspect that he should have listened to his wife and actually retired when he left central rather than work security in the private sector. On the other hand, if he stayed at home his wife would probably annoy him just as much as this lady.

“Ma’am,” Sergeant Simmons answered as he called up yet another set of images on the left-most monitor and pointed them out to his assistant. “Your information was that Dr. Tam was skiing. On that information, we have had our entire staff plus half of central enforcement manning the lifts, and yet Dr. Tam has not showed his face anywhere on the mountain.

“I am now switching strategies, trying to determine where and with whom he was with earlier today. If we cannot get Dr. Tam directly, perhaps we can get to him through one of his friends. There are over four thousa

Comments
Sunday, 13 January 2008 17:47
Nice and thrilling chapter, and a nice compact summary of their current dilemma.
Sunday, 13 January 2008 17:54
Ohh, wouldn't it just be lovely if Cassandra was arrested for giving false information?! Serve her right! I'm glad Simmons got the upper hand on the little twit!

And tracking them via vid screens is just perfect. You expect a Core area to be crawling with cameras.

The end of this had my heart racing! Will Jayne make it back, or won't he . . . and what about Adria? Will we see her again? She'd got to be pretty pissed at Jayne for leaving her naked in that shack . . .
Sunday, 13 January 2008 18:30
Good chapter with plot developments

Jayne has really taken to skiing, LOL

I like how Mal hasn't forgotten the rub down from Inara, she reluctantly played along with.

And, Mal, knowing River is doing something to his boat before anyone else does; solid crew interactions.
Tuesday, 15 January 2008 08:52
Nice tension - good work!

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