Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Snowball - Chapter 10

Thursday, January 17, 2008

There’s a daring escape, and our hero’s finally secure some cargo. Chapter 10 of 11, we’re almost there people :)

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Set six months after the BDM, with standard pairings: Simon and Kaylee, Mal and Inara angst.

If you haven’t read the whole thing, I would recommend going back to - http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=19146

Of course - Its Joss’s world and his characters, but I sure am enjoying playing with them.

Thanks to Mal4prez for the wonderful beta type advice.

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Chapter 10

Jayne watched the hover transport glide away from him, continuing on down its route around the Cottonwoods resort delivering guests to their various ships. As soon as it turned the bend, he climbed the bank of snow behind the transport kiosk and clicked on his skis. The forest surrounding the kiosk was denser than the forest at the top of the mountain, but it was still not the densest wood he’d ever skied through. The bases of these tall pine trees were bare; snow covered boughs reached out from the trees only above the first ten or so feet, giving him plenty of room to maneuver.

With a hard push from his poles, he took off, winding his way through the wide tree trunks, easily picking up speed on the steep slope. Jayne regretted that his skis were leaving distinctive tracks in the snow behind him, but that couldn’t be helped. By the time someone thought to follow them, he would hopefully be long gone.

He had not gone far before the trees gave way to a wide open mound of snow surrounded wholly by sky. Jayne slowed to a stop near the jagged snow covered edge, planning his route down the cliff. Below him, he could see all the ships parked on the Aspen Loop. Serenity’s side engines were emitting a slight bluish glow as if she were preparing for take off, lucky for him her hatch was still wide open, waiting. He took a deep breath and absorbed one last look at the valley; even from this distance he recognized the security vehicles he’d seen at the lodge making their way towards his ship.

Jayne jumped the cliff, landing ten feet down on a wide tuft of snow with just enough room to turn to the right an

Comments
Thursday, 17 January 2008 07:07
Hey there – I’m going away for the weekend so the last chapter will have to wait till Monday night. – Enjoy Human Rights Day, be thankful for each day, each smile and each laugh. I'm going to be grateful for my freedom on the ski slope :) – Desert Girl
Thursday, 17 January 2008 07:50
Have fun.
Thursday, 17 January 2008 08:40
I wonder if Adam can ski <BEG>?

Vera <more, please!>
Thursday, 17 January 2008 13:11
Good stuff. And Jayne out-skiing an avalanche? Now that would have been something to see! Almost wish Serenity had scooped him up on the move! I can't wait to see the big cat ... makes me wonder if it's going to get loose and create havoc - until River speaks to her. I mean, with a name like Sweet Pea, that's just a bad omen!
Thursday, 17 January 2008 20:31
Jayne must be quite fast to do something like that! Can't wait for the animals to come and the crew's reactions!

Keep flyin'

PS: Have a little extra fun for me when you go skiing =)
Friday, 18 January 2008 03:33
What a fabulous ending to the action - the avalanche and Jayne flying into the bay. Wee! What a fun CGI shot that could be, with the snow burying the feds, too.

I enjoy Stiker. He's got a really human feel, a little more depth then the average job contact. And I like how Mal bullies him into fessing up. Good dialogue.

Have a great time skiing! Stay away from the avalanches - you have no spaceship to rescue you. ;)
Friday, 18 January 2008 03:34
Really good story line - had me guessing which way this was going to go. Hava a great time!

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