Unfinished Business
Chapter Twenty
The next two days saw Dr. Simon Tam, fugitive from justice and former trauma surgeon, become Inspector Simon Marshal, Agent of Parliament. A suitable uniform was found and fitted. The many electronic appliances a true Inspector would be expected to carry were procured – scientific instruments, record keepers, medical encyclopedias, and a priority cortex relay. And Simon had two full fourteen-hour days cramming for the part, learning background information and minutia that might trip him up.
The rest of the crew was almost as busy. Kaylee was so enthusiastic about a real overhaul, however brief, that she spent nearly every waking moment in the bowels of Serenity. She didn’t even miss Simon much, she was so distracted.
When he wasn’t otherwise in briefings and planning sessions, Mal spent his time talking with his fellow captains and discovering a few old friends from the War who had disappeared into the Gopher Hole afterwards. His unease about the trappings of the Independents mellowed in some ways, deepened in others. Seeing old comrades he had thought dead, and discovering them no more radical or crazy than he remembered helped mellow him. A large part of the deepening was due to Zoë.
Zoë had found her own role. At her insistence – and against Mal’s moderate objections – she had volunteered to lead one of the assault and evacuation teams.
“Why?” he had asked, when she had told him – with only a trace of guilt in her eyes.
“Because they need experienced people for the assault teams, Sir. Remember Turk from the 223rd Recon? He’s here. He remembered me from the Gideon Offensive, and recommended me, and they asked real nice.”
“Woulda been nice to have asked me,” Mal said, rubbing his chin.
“Consider this me askin’, Sir,” she said, almost serenely. “I’d be obliged if you went ahead and said ‘yes’. Not like you truly need me on the boat.”
“This ain’t like you, Zoe,” he said, shaking his head. “Can’t say I ain’t concerned.”
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That brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful writing Scew, just wonderful.
I'm thinking the other shoe is going to drop pretty heavily on all the revelry when Simon leaves. Is he going to tell anyone, or just go? He seemed to dismiss Kaylee at every turn in this chapter, which isn't boding well for their continued relationship. Even if she didn't seem to notice.
And Simon was using the prospect of him leaving and doing something stupid as a ruse to keep everyone occupied while he pulled off the party. He'll be with everyone else when the rescue begins.
StA
And I too thought the River-Inara conversation about River's abilities acting like a receiver dish for every hormone-fuelled thought from the male (and female, to be non-exclusive) Browncoats on the stations was hilariously brilliant! I would imagine Joss, Summer and Morena just milking this for all it would have been worth:D
BEB
What I like especially is the depiction of the under ground Browncoats. They're not as bad as the Alliance, but their anger at their defeat still resonates and are just as dangerous in their own fashion. Just like real life, there are no ideal answers. You keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
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“This was a lot easier to deal with when I was batshit crazy,” River sighed.
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That may be one of my most favorite lines ever!!!
Simon's birthday suprise made me teary- eyed. Thanks! I knew you were a softy, Screw.
I liked Inara's POV and how her future is uncertain and how she's mentally preparing herself for the worst in regards to the Guild. Her political shifts are logically unfolding and well written. Mal giving her space and shopping cash is probably wisest at this juncture, so she's not scared off.
The Tams scare the hell out of me. I'm so glad I don't know rich people that act like that. So no comment on them.
I'm enjoying this story... best plot and characterizations. love it
“My butt looks fantastic, thank you, and there is NOTHING wrong with my gorram ankles!” she said quietly, but intently, and passed by, leaving a very confused young man in her wake.
You actually write Inara so that I like her. There's something to be said for that. :)
“I ain’t seein anyone at th’ moment,” Jayne said conversationally.
Hee hee!!
That brought a very big smile to my face.
Well done chapter, like always.
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