The Wish Part Seven
Tuesday, June 5, 2007
Post BDM. Rayne and Saylee. Takes place one year after The Need. As Simon and Kaylee are having troubles. River and Jayne deepen their relationship.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2271 RATING: 9.0 (NC17) SERIES: FIREFLY
The Wish Part Seven
Author:JJ
Subject: Rayne, Saylee, Mara
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Ain't hers, to make coin off of. These here characters (like yours truly) belong solely to Joss and the hwoon dahn's at 20 century fox, dong ma? (Thank you, Jayne!)
Summary: Post BDM. Rayne and Saylee. Takes place one year after The Need. As Simon and Kaylee are having troubles. River and Jayne deepen their relationship.
Author's note: I'm basically typing this on my laptop in the bathroom of my hotel room, why you ask? Because I love you guys. LOL!
Chapter 7-- Love and War
Zoe and Walk found Jayne passed out on the common area floor. She shook her head as she watched him cuddling up to his empty booze bottle as if it was River. She kicked him in the butt.
"Wha--? Whaa?" he jumped up.
"Why in the hell are you drunk this time of day?" Zoe asked and Walk jumped on Jayne who was trying very hard to keep down his cheap booze.
"River's pregnant," Jayne said and Zoe's eyes went wide.
"Oh", she said. "Drink on."
"She thinks I'm gonna die, I'm inclined to be believing her," he slurred and Walk drummed on his head. "Hey kids, you beat it now," he grumbled and Zoe laughed at "kids".
"Ai ya, Jayne, how much booze did you drink?" she grabbed his arm and he let her help him off the floor. Walk was giggling uncontrollably, Dada was walking funny.
"I don't know, this is--was the third bottle," he downed the swallow that was left at the bottom of the bottle.
"Come on big guy, I'll help you back to your shuttle where you best be sobering up before River finds you like this. Whatever she saw, getting drunk about it ain't helping one bit," she softly scolded him. Ever since Walk decided that big burly Jayne was his Dada, she viewed Jayne alot differently than before Walk came along. Seeing Jayne step up and accept the role Walk placed on his shoulders , not only humbled her, but she knew it would have humbled Wash as well.
She helped Jayne back into his shuttle and onto his bed, he tripped and she landed on top of him.
"Mama, Dad
ok, that was a good LOL line :)
and you really had me fooled with that dream sequence! i was all crazy thinking it was way to quick, sudden, and underdone... so i was very glad it wasn't done at all :)
Saffron trying to woo Simon away - she needs to be more devious about it. I sorta thought she was gonna go the way of leaving the kid on Serenity's doorstep. That seems more like her. Or at least more of her type of plan, but then once she holds that little baby, she'd think differently, so maybe trying to woo Simon is a better option.
Post again soon!
Oh...and Jayne's line to Mal about the booze? I can just imagine Adam putting on the greatest embarrassed face as he prepares to say he drank the ship dry;D
One thing I would like to know is that I have been quite intrigued by how you have had Saffron deal with being pregnant. One would assume she would have had it aborted the first chance she got because being knocked up tends to muck up cons she would want to pull somewhat. But I get the feeling that abandoning it would not be a choice to her...too much the vibe of being that child a couple of decades past;)
BEB
I was actually doing some research on Firefly because a friend of mine was obsessed and I stumbled across this site but I wasn't getting anywhere so I came to look at the Fan-Fics and yours was the first one I saw.
Anyway, you're stories have helped me to at least understand the lingo more than I'd origionally hoped so thank you! And thanks for posting such amazing stories. I'll be keeping my eye out for the next one. ^_^
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