The Wish Part Six *revised*
Thursday, May 31, 2007
Post BDM. Rayne and Saylee. Takes place one year after The Need. As Simon and Kaylee are having troubles. River and Jayne deepen their relationship.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2314 RATING: 9.0 (NC17) SERIES: FIREFLY
The Wish Part Six
Author:JJ
Subject: Rayne, Saylee, Mara
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Ain't hers, to make coin off of. These here characters (like yours truly) belong solely to Joss and the hwoon dahn's at 20 century fox, dong ma? (Thank you, Jayne!)
Summary: Post BDM. Rayne and Saylee. Takes place one year after The Need. As Simon and Kaylee are having troubles. River and Jayne deepen their relationship.
Author's Note: Points to who ever tells me what song the title of chapter six is from. No internet searches cheaters! LOL!
Author's note 2: This was revised for grammatical corrections and flow. Thanks for reading!
Chapter 6-- Oh, I been flying... Mama, there ain't no denyin'
Zoe was in the cargo bay with Walker playing with building blocks and Wash's dinosaurs. No matter how many toys Walk received he only wanted to play with his father's. Zoe remembered all the names Wash gave the dinosaurs and she past those names down to her son. It was a small thing to do for now, until he was old enough to understand exactly who his father was. She closed her eyes against the pain of his loss that sometimes crept up on her like now.
She picked up the pterodactyl and made swooping noises over her son's head immersing herself in this game so she could stop thinking of Wash. It was still hard to put him in the past tense and it still hurt her to know that her son would never laugh at one of his jokes, or play dinosaurs with him. She looked into his green eyes and touched his face. He had Wash's face, his smile and his laugh. It was as if Wash knew this child was the last great thing he'd contribute to the world and he wanted him to be a perfect replica of himself. The only thing he inherited from his mother was his stubbornness and her curly brown hair.
"Wash would not believe his eyes," Mal said from the catwalk. He walked down the stairs and Walk jumped up.
"Mac," he toddled towards Mal his arms up. Mal immediately picked him up. He saw the sadness in Zoe's eyes and realized she was having a bad day. She had l
I love the opening with Zoe and little Walk. Funny how she was expecting the song and dance about Mal/Inara proposal and rejection and proposal...
Simon's parents were utterly evil! How can they hate Kaylee? Why would they sell out their own kid?! Evil! Evil! They should have sentenced themselves to their own death before sacrificing their children for money! Oh, I hate them SO SO MUCH!!!!
And Jayne getting drunk in the morning... so like him. It's great how he and Mal are like brothers now. Guess they can't help it after so many years together and both of them getting all soft, falling in love.
Please don't kill Jayne... or Simon... or River's baby... or ANYONE!!!! (unless it just makes a truly heart-wrenching, life affirming story arc, in which case, you can borrow my gun.)
Another fabulous chapter here, JJ! Definitely was all kinds of impressed with the insidious medical mucking about you had the Alliance do on both Simon and River, and it's interesting to see a split decision on the Tams Senior being evil:)
BEB
I will stop reading here and pretend that Simon lost the people trailing him. Turns out he's not sterile, Saffron becomes a good little mom, River and Jayne get married and have one hundred fat children and live happily ever after the End.
Oh and Mal and Inara get married too.
Very intriguing ...
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