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The Wish Part Two

Sunday, May 20, 2007

Post BDM. Rayne and Saylee. Takes place one year after The Need. As Simon and Kaylee are having troubles. River and Jayne deepen their relationship.

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The Wish Part Two

Author:JJ

Subject: Rayne, Saylee

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: Ain't hers, to make coin off of. These here characters (like yours truly) belong solely to Joss and the hwoon dahn's at 20 century fox, dong ma? (Thank you, Jayne!)

Summary: Post BDM. Rayne and Saylee. Takes place one year after The Need. As Simon and Kaylee are having troubles. River and Jayne deepen their relationship.

Author's Note: This fic is still NC-17 even though there's no smutty parts because I write the G rated stuff first and then add the NC-17 stuff later. (Preferrably after a glass of wine, LOL) So far I've written up to chapter 4 and there's still no smut so we will see. Those looking for the Hot Hot Rayne or Saylee parts, white knuckle for a bit and I'll see what I can conjure up, :o)!

Chapter 2-- Symbolism and Tradition

Mal and Jayne were in the cargo hold unloading a few crates they received in a shipment at the postmaster. Jayne was unloading crates so fast Mal thought he was going to throw his back out.

"Slow down, Jayne, a hurt Merc does me a bit of good," he warned.

"Mama sent me something, it says here in her letter," he took it out of his back pocket. "It's important, I'm just trying to find it under all this other go se," Jayne said and then smiled when he found the small package. He hurriedly opened it like a kid on Christmas day. Mal shook his head, and walked over to get a better view of what was sending his Merc into such a tizzy.

Inside of the box was a smaller black velvet ring box and Mal's eyes went wide, "You're asking River to marry you?"

"Yup, no more hoping she gets tired of me, huh? Not if she's wearing this," Jayne smirked.

"I'm over wanting you two to break up," Mal said. He had to admit after a year of watching them work and live together that they had something there.

"Yeah right," Jayne said and Mal put his hand on his shoulder.

"Seriously."

"Well then," Jayne said surprised. "I was wondering with you being a Captain and all, and since it'll take awhile t

Comments
Sunday, 20 May 2007 01:54
Horray!!!

I love the story and the Disclaimer and Authors note cracked me up! Keep up the great work.
Sunday, 20 May 2007 02:57
I really liked Simon's last line ... and I'm worried about him and Kaylee. I too was wondering if maybe it was a problem with Simon and not Kaylee, but that is a touchy, touchy subject!

Can't wait for more! Would it help if I put in a vote for some smut in later chapters? A glass wine always helps me write it too!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 05:10
oh, poor inara and poor kaylee. and smack simon for thinking it's all kaylee's fault that they can't concieve. and smack mal for being so slow to move. and yay for jayne and river. jayne is such a teddy bear!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 12:08
More, more, more please!!! Can't get enough!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 22:07
Speaking as a guy, I doubt any person of the male gender wants to find out his swimmers are not up to competing. So while it's a sign of Simon's boobishness, I am not wholly surprised. Still hope Simon and Kaylee conceive soon:)

And Mal needs to step the pace up a little, cuz if Inara is getting ansty, he's got to know that his doubts could lose him Inara's presence in his life...again! Even being engaged would probably give him some breathing room, honestly;)

BEB
Sunday, 20 May 2007 22:09
Oh, and for reference's sake, Simon/Kaylee pair-ups are usually classified under the banner of "Silee"...though yours is lovely as well;)

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