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The Losing Side, Chapter 43

Friday, May 18, 2007

Mal receives some devastating news from Lee, the commander of the POW camp he's confined in.

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“Get Malcolm Reynolds, inmate INDVHSH5603 up to my office,” Lee ordered.

“Yes, sir,” the bored assistant replied. He poked his head back into the office a moment later. “Sir, he’s currently in medical. They’ll bring him up here next.”

~~~~~

"How are you feeling?" asked Kelli, probing carefully at the wound on Mal's forehead.

"Developin’ a phobia of dessert plates. You?" replied Mal with a mischievous grin.

The nurse rolled her eyes. "Microwaves everywhere tremble at the sound of my name," she replied. "Looks like this is healing just fine," she said, giving him a pat on the shoulder. "You being treated okay?"

Mal got the impression the question was motivated by more than purely medical concern, and his eyes softened. "On the whole," he replied. A shadow crossed her face, and she answered him with a quiet touch.

"Honestly though, all tableware phobias aside – you feeling okay?" she asked.

Mal nodded. "You’re lookin’ at the picture of health.”

She raised her eyebrows speculatively. “The picture of health has a gash on its forehead, an arm turning five shades of purple, and walks with a limp?”

“That it does,” affirmed Mal, his eyes sparkling.

She shook her head in affectionate frustration, pouting at him. “You’re impossible to deal with even when you’re bein’ nice and cooperative, you know that?”

“I got a reputation ta’ uphold,” replied Mal.

~~~~

Lee stood, handing Mal a crisply folded document without meeting his gaze. "That constitutes official notice that you stand charged with war crimes against the Alliance. You will be assigned an advocate, and your trial will take place a week from today."

Mal unfolded the paper without any change of expression, despite the feeling that someone had slammed a baseball bat into his stomach. His eyes scanned the words without seeing them, and finally he spoke. "Come to the conclusion that wasn’t more’n a threat."

"It wasn’t," said Lee. "Things changed. Politics have a way of doing that."

"And the

Comments
Friday, 18 May 2007 03:04
Lovely, as always. This story has been fascinating me for some time now. Keep up the good work!
Friday, 18 May 2007 03:18
Interesting views on humanity and compassion and its antithesis - war.
Friday, 18 May 2007 12:36
This was utterly brilliant but boy do you keep us waiting between posts. Each time I think you are not going to continue another chapter pops up out of the blue, and like someone dying of thirst in a desert I am so grateful it's embarrassing. LOL. I thought this was an exceptional insight into Lee but my heart is all wrung out for Mal and infinitely impressed that he is hanging on in there at all given all that has been thrown at him. It feels as if his internment is never ending already, how long has he been incarcerated now? And to have war crimes thrown at him too is just another cruel turn of the screw. I really do hope that hope that Lee was hinting at has some real basis in fact. Please post the next chapter quicker if you can, it is torture being drip fed. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
NBZ
Friday, 18 May 2007 19:54
Well, ain't prison a bag of fun?

Why do I think Mal will have a problem keeping tightlipped?

/ponders on the meaning of life
Saturday, 19 May 2007 05:29
Completely stupendous work here, jetflair! Much as I want to rant on about how the wait times between chapters - brilliant as they are - are getting ridiculous...I realize that RL can make for an opponent mightier than the Alliance on their best day:(

Some superb dialogue work here between Mal and Lee. Really gotta say that Joss & co. are probably secretly reading this and gnashing their teeth at how you're A) taking up their mantle so effortlessly; and B)crafting a brilliant treatise on the nature of warfare, nature vs. nurture and all kinds of important philosophical topics that haunt the works of Whedon;D

BEB
Saturday, 19 May 2007 14:54
Excellent issues you bring into this jetflair, and following the methods of Joss you've made it some sorta shade of gray. No one's evil, no one's good.

Really good dialogue too - and I'm looking forward to Zoe coming back into this!
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 14:04
I read this chapter through three times for the pure pleasure of the dialog you created. Very fine flow and intertwining between the two. Lee has become quite a solid, well-rounded character and you write him with good consistancy.

Looking forward to seeing how Mal handles this trial and if he can play complacent lapdog for the sake of getting himself a 'nicer' prison (I'm guessing--hoping, actually--not).

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