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The Need Part Seven

Wednesday, May 16, 2007

Post BDM. Rayne. Serenity's deadliest begin to connect after a long stint in the Black.

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The Need Part Seven

Author: J.J.

Subject: Rayne

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: The characters in this fic are not mine, they belong to the Power that is Joss and 20th Century Fox. I'm just borrowing them for fun.

Summary: Post BDM. Rayne. Serenity's deadliest begin to connect after a long stint in the Black.

Author's Note: I'm going to admit it, this chapter kicked my ass. The problem is I hear Jayne very LOUDLY in my head. So his voice tends to drown out everyone else except Mal. LOL. And for those of you who inquired, this fic is not Betaed,it's proofread to the best of my ability.

Chapter 7-- See Jayne Run. Run Jayne Run

"River, please stand aside so I can shoot Jayne," Mal, calmly asked as he pulled out his firearm. Kaylee grabbed Mal by the coat as he charged Jayne.

"Cap'n stop, they love each other," Kaylee yelled.

"That old hwoon dahn took advantage of an eighteen year old girl," Mal yelled.

"This eighteen year old girl seduced that old hwoon dahn," River said arms folded in front of her, calmly standing in front of Jayne.

"This is unacceptable, I'm not having this on my boat!" Mal said angrily.

"Fine give us our share of our money and we will be off Serenity when we get to Three Hills," River demanded and Jayne shook his head impressed with his woman. He chuckled shaking his head.

"Get that smile off your face, Jayne, before I shoot it off," Mal growled and Jayne's full smile went to a smirk.

"Cap'n Simon is not going to let her leave Serenity," Kaylee said. "And River ain't leavin, Jayne! Let's just get back on Serenity and we can all talk it out!"

Mal looked at Kaylee's pleading eyes and sighed, "Fine, but when Simon stabs you with his pointy operatin' tools, I ain't patchin you up!" he said to Jayne.

As soon as they got back on to Serenity Mal went stomping off to Simon.

"Pansy," Jayne muttered and River shook her head.

Inara walked down the cargo bay stairs after Mal angrily stormed past her. She saw Jayne and River holding hands and she closed her eyes and

Comments
Wednesday, 16 May 2007 20:21
*claps*

a 10 for another highly entertaining chapter.

You did a good job with the edits. I,for one, don't give a gorram about spelling nor grammer if it doesn;t distract with the story. But some people are just anal retentive about that kinda thing.

Good luck with the next chapters- and i hope this story goes on and on and on and on lol
Wednesday, 16 May 2007 20:38
oh, captain of cruel jokes. what is it with this crew?! i think that was more cruel to Kaylee and Inara than it was to Jayne and River. at least Jayne was expecting to get shot on account of it and could be pleasantly surprised.

smiles, and claps, and woo-hoo to Simon for being such an understanding brother.
SUVIE
Wednesday, 16 May 2007 21:00
lol OUTstanding
Thursday, 17 May 2007 19:00
Oh...this would have made for a fabulous episode, especially if we initially saw the crew hanging out in the cargo bay waiting for Simon to arrive, Simon chewing out Jayne and then shooting him. All before the tile credits roll;D

I just hope Mal can talk Inara down soon...cuz it was funny! Would think she's more pissed about being left out than the actual prank itself.

BEB

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