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Firefly season 2:3 Duel of Deceit part 5

Tuesday, May 1, 2007

eedless violence begins here – with decapitation and a really cool swordfight

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(act5)

“Mal! Mal! Oh god Mal he said you were still alive”

“Malcolm Reynolds you low life Wake up! She shouts

‘urh I didn’t do eet’ he slurs ‘aarrhhh I’m in pain’

“obviously” Inara rolls her eyes

‘did you hit me?’

“no I haven’t had that pleasure yet”

‘what happened did anyone get the number of that mule?’

“Is a smart man with simple but handsome features the last thing you remember?”

‘don’t know everythings a blank’

“tawny yellow hair”

‘what did you say?’

“tawny yell…”

‘shush woman I’m thinking – why that little Ching-wah tsao duh liou mahng – bastard shot me’

“a stun charge”

‘huh’

“he fired a dart into you that electrocuted you – he did the same to me”

‘I’m gonna kill im, I’m gonna kill im’

“it’s Atherton – he’s behind this”

‘Atherton wing – fancy guy with the perchance for knives and swords’

“yes”

‘Why the Huh choo-shang tza-jiao duh tzang-huo – I should have finished him off when I had the chance’

“he hates you for humiliating him and me for having the guild veto him – now he has used his entire fortune to extract vengeance”

‘were going to die’

“you first and after Atherton is fed up with me I’ll join you”

‘relax Zoe will rescue us’

“one problem”

‘what’

“no one knows where we are or who has us – they probably haven’t realised that were missing yet”

‘ahh well since plan A is sorta flawed we’ll…well its simple’

“good so are you”

Ignoring the jab he continues ‘so we switch to plan B’

Serenity is flying over trees and grassy hills

“I’m not so sure this is going to work hon” states Wash at the controls

‘they won’t be expecting us to drop in on them’ answers Zoe

“only you and Book can handle a gun – we should have found Jayne”

‘no time to find him – Inara and the captain are in trouble’

Meanwhile at the Wing estate

“they are approaching now” declares one of Atherton’s henchmen – from a security/control room

‘good good” Atherton is triumphant “let them enter the estate and then get them’

He st

Comments
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 14:36
episode 4 will be delayed as this chapter was and may take a month or two to get it in production and is a merger of firefly and doctor who/ torchwood

About E3 – I turned Atherton into a crazed maniac – but after losing to mal he went into a state of decline

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