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Firefly season 2:3 Duel of deceit part 1

Tuesday, February 27, 2007

Persephone based episode – the crew unload their passengers and onload some trouble

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(Teaser)

Serenity lands on Persephone at the down town docks (the usual place) the cargo bay doors open the Gerrelds leave

Mal ‘thanks for flying Serenity spaceways anytime you need a ship do me a favour and ask some other captain’

Mr Gerreld stone faced leaves with his family

Calling after him ‘pleasure doing business with you’ Mal gives them a wave while smirking

Jayne approaches from the back “how much?”

‘well that wasn’t so bad – got some coin – did the work, that's what matters’

Jayne “how much”

‘sir I don’t think we should work for showbiz people again – gave us a mighty big peck of trouble’ informs Zoe

Jayne “and the money don’t forget the money – now how much?”

‘ahh I don’t think showbiz is the problem Zoe – way I see it – it was the legit job that did it for us’

Jayne is sick of been ignored and hollers “HOW MUCH!?!”

Mal is impatient ‘how much of what?’

“coin ya idjit – how much coin did we score?”

Mal smiles ‘We fleeced him for 8500 credits’

“gimme my share”

Zoe snorts ‘of all the greedy – no good…don’t you think of anything but money?’

Jayne is about to speak when mal quickly adds “and whores”

Jayne is now thinking an unusual and terrifying image

‘recon were wasting are time here sir best give him his share and let him get on with it’ states Zoe

Mal does so and calls on the coms “we’ve got a day to find another job and get of this rock so I want all the crew to keep their eyes peeled” turns back to the cargo bay doors and freezes

A group of heavies toting guns in an eco of E2’s Zeke and his gang are standing outside

Mal puts his hands up and says “my names Reynolds Malcolm Reynolds not Jon Davidson”

Take my love, take my land

Take me where I cannot stand

I don't care, I'm still free

You can't take the sky from me

Take me out to the black

Tell them I ain't comin' back

Burn the land and boil the sea

You can't take the sky from me

There'

Comments
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 15:29
this is the one we’ve all been waiting for – a lot of old enemies and a friend returns – plus the last chapter will feature a lot of needless violence,
Again it’s been tricky to write and spelling errors were unavoidable but what do you think so far?
Wednesday, 28 February 2007 08:18
I think you something mighty promising here, jeraxus. Just need to keep a steady on all things typographical;D

BEB
SUSANAH
Thursday, 15 March 2007 19:22
Ooooo! Neat combination of characters.

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