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Firefly Season 2:2 Showbiz part 2

Friday, January 26, 2007

continues where we left of with the crew of serenity been held at gunpoint by a stranger and his thugs who are demanding the return of their property

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(Act 2)

Mal “now come on – no need for violence, we just want to go about are business”

Stranger ‘Tough – after you hand over the goods – you can consider your self lucky if we allow you to leave this rock in anything other than a coffin’

Mal hollers to Zoe “Zoe – do we have anything that belongs to this fine upstanding gentlemen with the large, clean, shiny shotgun aimed at my head”

From inside the cargo bay looking out ‘Don’t think so sir’

Mal “now as you can see we haven’t…” just remembers “one minute – Jayne is there anything you want to tell me?”

‘I’m innocent Mal I swear all I did last night was get drunk and meet the tastiest piece ‘o’…’

Simon “that’s enough details – I think we all get the picture”

Wash ‘Amen to that Doc’

Mal “as I was saying – we don’t seem to have your property mister…”

‘Names Zeke as you were told Davidson – now I’ll give you twenty seconds to remember where you put the goods then I’ll shoot you in the leg, ‘nother twenty seconds after I’ll start on your crew’

Mal is worried but then realizes what Zeke said and is relieved “um Davidson is that my name?”

Suspicious ‘what are you trying to pull’

“Names Malcolm Reynold – Captain Reynold to you but my crew call me Mal or Sir, you’ve got the wrong man”

‘Don’t give me that you’re Jonathon Davidson and this is your ship the Dragonfire’

“She’s called Serenity right captain?” pipes up Kaylee

‘Sure is Kaylee’

“that does it you Huen Dahn I’m gonna end you’re…”

‘Boss! Boss!’

A smarter looking thug runs up to them (he is probably the 2nd in command)

“What is it!” snarls Zeke

‘You know lefty said that Git Davidson was docked here’ the man is out of breath

“of course”

‘well he was wrong – Dragonfire has just took of from the portlands docking station’

“Why that F’n Zse – Pi Gu – Wuming Shao Jwu ‘pollogise for the mix up Captain Reynolds wasn’t it – I wont give you no trouble”

To the thugs “no

Comments
Friday, 26 January 2007 12:59
hope you like how i got after the last episodes cliffhanger - i apolagise to all those who assumed it was serenitys previous owner but i didn't notice it could be seen like that untill it was pointed out to me,
i've struggled with this weeks cliffhanger as you can see,
i have been lucky to be able to tap a reasonably rich vain of humour up till now,
things are not going to go so smooth with the intro of the theater manager and a possible return of Zeke and his thugs,
- i apolagise for spelling errors (including that one) and mistakes,
(in another chapter or two we'll get a kaylee/simon moment)
Saturday, 27 January 2007 07:09
Bah...it's an honest mistake for all invovled. Sides...think of it as an inadvertant cliffhanger plot point that gets quickly resolved in the follow-up;)

And I gotta admit...Simon's reaction to the question about why he didn't bust out his Core-bred snobbery was quite wonderful:)

BEB
LOSER01
Monday, 29 January 2007 10:33
A star material ma man
what comes next - an when do we get to the killin and fightin an action and stuff?

p.s. your profile says your in england me too were english browncoats dude

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