Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE
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Friday, 02 February 2007 13:12
the next chapter will see the return of Zeke and his gang – the wrath of the AUE and the crew meet the Gerrelds
i appolagise for all spelling errors, and for the time it took to post this - fic but in my college fireflyfans.net has been offline for a while
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i appolagise for all spelling errors, and for the time it took to post this - fic but in my college fireflyfans.net has been offline for a while
(and internet access has been restricted
Friday, 02 February 2007 17:10
They're trying to stop the signal?!? Oh...that won't do at all!
;)
Still...this is some interesting stuff you got here, jeraxus. Some small typographic booboos, but generally leagues better than earlier chapters. And I gotta give you props for having Mal take advantage (I assume it's Mal because you don't indicate who speaks, but only Mal would take up the like about the manager being God in his own theatre ;D) of the manager's line:D
BEB
;)
Still...this is some interesting stuff you got here, jeraxus. Some small typographic booboos, but generally leagues better than earlier chapters. And I gotta give you props for having Mal take advantage (I assume it's Mal because you don't indicate who speaks, but only Mal would take up the like about the manager being God in his own theatre ;D) of the manager's line:D
BEB
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