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Firefly season 2:3 Duel of deceit part 3

Thursday, March 15, 2007

Lord Harrow has a proposal and Bad Boy Atherton Wing is back and looking for vengeance!

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(Act 3)

Mal was making his way across Persephone – the meeting with Badger had gone well he considers – Harrow must be offering a lot of cash for safe transport and if he’s really willing to trust me again – well it’s the perfect job.

Self absorbed Mal passes through a market without a glance – Big Mistake!

The man steps forward and mal suddenly notices him

Tawny hair - yellowy brown but with black turfs, a rugged head but with casual features, simple but clean clothes,

He wouldn't stand out in a crowd even if you looked – well if it wasn’t for the fact that the guy was grinning predatorily at Mal

‘Captain Reynolds…you’re coming with me’

Mal reaches for his gun when a jolt of pain shorts through him – he collapses paralysed and loses consciousness

The stranger smiles and talks into a com ‘target obtained’ pause ‘what of the ship and crew?’ pause ‘secondary?’ pause ‘you want Inara Sera – she is a registered companion – the guild do not take such matters lightly!’ shakes head ‘I understand’ turns com off

Motions to two henchmen ‘you know what to do with him’

The man strides purposely but worriedly – no one takes the guilds lightly unless they want to end up dead or wake up with out private parts – he winces at the thought – he’d have to play this real cagey

At a high class restaurant – Inara is waiting to meet her client when she sees a familiar face

“why lord Harrow – I never realised you would be here – please sit”

He nods stiffly but declines the seat ‘I am not here for the food miss sera – I came to see you’

“I’m sorry but I already have a client – if you would send me your details – I might be able to schedule some time”

‘you misunderstand me I have no desire to hire our services’

“I don’t understand”

‘I apologise’ sits down ‘but when I heard you were here – I had to see you – I know you are still aquatinted with Captain Reynolds’

Frowns slightly but recovers “yes but if yo

Comments
Thursday, 15 March 2007 15:41
sorry for the misleading synopsis last chapter but it was becoming too long to add in Mal and Inara – and we’ve finally discovered the truth behind chapter 1’s cliff-hanger ending

I appolagise for anuy and all spelling errors (including that 1) all feed back appreciated except for the winy gits who always moan (lets blue eyed brigadier out then) only joking you're my number 1 fan
Friday, 16 March 2007 03:29
Whiny git, am I? Huh...guess an appreciation for good grammar and spelling isn't worthy much these days!

;)

Definitely a good effort here, jeraxus. A bit rushed with Inara's scene, but the whole chapter worked well;)

BEB

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