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The Losing Side, Chapter 39

Monday, March 12, 2007

Mal winds up in the hospital after being attacked by a guard at the POW camp.

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Mal lay down with relief on the hospital bed that the two calmly pleasant guards led him to; he’d halfway expected to be beaten again as soon as he was out of sight of the cafeteria, and he was so dizzy that staying on his feet had become overly complicated. He took a deep breath and gritted his teeth, ignoring the pleasantries and explanations swirling around him. Now that he was safely in the hospital he was back to noticing matters like how very much his head hurt.

One of the guards started to buckle his arms into soft restraints mounted on the sides of the bed, and in a split second Mal’s composure vanished. He tried to break free in panic, the sheer terror of his last stay there flooding back in full. Being severely injured and strapped down at the mercy of the enemy had been a horror no drugs or kind words could relieve, and at that moment Mal was willing to fight to the death rather than be restrained again.

Strong hands forced him against the bed, and Mal screamed, overcome with fear and helplessness. “Let go of me, you fëi hün shëng zi of yuán hóu,” he roared, rebounding almost instantly and slamming his fist into the nearest unseen figure as panic turned into dark fury. “You wanna immobilize me, you best make sure in advance I can’t move.”

He felt a hand grab his elbow and lashed out with lethal force, but the guard let him go and dodged the blow easily. “Sir!” the guard shouted. “We aren’t gonna rutting hurt you, you hun dahn!”

“Stop!” yelled a horrified female voice. “Let go of him, now!” she ordered furiously. “Get out !”

The guards obeyed, and Mal gasped for breath, trying to regain his composure as he heard them exit the room. “Who the hell are you?” asked Mal grimly, turning his head in her direction. “And what’s on your agenda, might I ask?” It wasn’t a friendly question.

There was a sort of h

Comments
Monday, 12 March 2007 22:14
Very enjoyable scene. I've had to use similar methods to get patients to cooperate. For some it's humor, for other it's force. For some it's forceful humor. Anyway, you handled the uncertain patient Mal very well. Glad to see you back.

"The hero of Canton, the man they call... ME."

Rob O.
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 02:18
The forehead scar story huh? Great as always. I really enjoy your story so far.
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 03:30
Ya know...I have never noticed that Mal or Nathan had a scar on his forehead, so this fabulous tale kinda doesn't have the same kinda spark it does for those who ogle every inch of Nathan's body;)

And this was definitely a brilliant bit of exploration, jetflair! Really loved how you had Mal struggling not to freak out and Dr. Morgan making it quite clear that he will do what is necessary to both treat a patient and project himself and his staff:D

BEB
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 10:56
Very cool, I could see so see and imagine feeling like Mal in that self same position of vulnerability when his trust has already been stretched to the breaking limit and beyond. Loved how Kelli especially put the effort into reassuring him and getting him to relax enough for them to help him. Such a shiny story, can't wait for Mal to be reunited with Wash and the others. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 April 2007 02:48
Mal's turnaround from complaint at the gentle treatment to dangerous and wild was very well handled. The tension between all people and the way they behaved was really fine. First rate.
Friday, 13 April 2007 02:48
"compliant", not "complaint"
Saturday, 17 January 2009 00:17
This... I think I get a little something more you're hinting at here too. Why Mal is always so uneasy and tetchy when Simon's treating him.

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