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Saved You in the War, Chapter 2/3

Monday, February 26, 2007

Mal and Zoe hone their Big Damn Hero skills saving each other in the war. This is a three-part story inspired by the line in War Stories. It was originally going to be part of my extraordinarily long POW story The Losing Side (as a flashback), but in an effort to focus that tale a little bit I decided to take it out and post it seperately. It only ties into TLS in a very limited way - this was originally going to be a story Mal told Wash, but it didn't work too well that way. It does explain why Mal had that nerve cluster moved in his back, too.

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"Easy, sir, easy. Don't try to move, you're okay," said a woman's voice. Mal blinked, trying to conjure where he was. The question was answered for him soon enough. "You're on an orbiting hospital ship, and you just came out of surgery."

Mal tried to look up at the woman speaking, but he was lying on his face, and his head was responding sluggishly to his commands. The slight movement increased the swimming of his head, and he retched, trying to vomit.

He felt a firm hand on his shoulder as though the sensation was coming from a body other than his own. "I told you not move around," she chided gently, pressing an injector against his arm and giving him a shot he didn't feel. "That'll take care of the nausea, just lie still while it takes effect."

His vision and his head cleared after a few minutes, and he started taking in his surroundings. He was lying face down in a hospital bed, with a partial view of an incongruously homey flowered curtain and an unseemly number of tubes attached to him.

"Feeling better?" the doctor asked.

"Yeah," said Mal. "Can I move now? Can't say as this is the most graceful position I've ever been in."

"No," the doctor replied. "You're temporarily paralyzed." She saw the shock on Mal's face and spoke with a tight smile. " Temporarily , Sergeant. You had shrapnel imbedded in a major nerve cluster in your back, and - shall we just say the typical protocols for back trauma don't involve tying the patient to a scrap of metal and dragging them across a rocky battlefield? It saved your life, but it also paralyzed you and caused severe internal and external bleeding. We've already removed the shrapnel and stopped the bleeding, but I need you to decide how to go on from here."

"Um -would it be too obvious to suggest that you de-paralyze me?" asked Mal.

She chuckled, sitting on a low stool next to the bed so that he could see her face. "It's the way we go about it that I need your input on, Sergeant. We can regenerate the nerve cluste

Comments
Monday, 26 February 2007 08:57
This was utterly brilliant up until the very end - where's Zoe???? I loved how in character you have both Mal and Zoe and the way you explain how the doctor healed the injury to Mal's nerve cluster fits in so eloquently with what we find out when he is fighting the Operative. Very fine work, can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 26 February 2007 18:02
Still very enjoyable.

So, would it be possible for me to have a couple of nerve clusters moved...?


"You shot me in the back! I haven't made you angry, have I?"

Rob O.
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 03:38
Another great chapter.
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 07:06
The doc's gotta point..and I gotta wonder if Mal has ended up like the people she mentioned who would keep going after serious injury cuz they knew they could survive serious trauma? I mean...how many wounds has Mal canonically sustained?

;)

Still...this was definitely brilliant work. Though I wanna fugging know where Zoe whent, jetflair!

BEB
Thursday, 22 March 2007 05:30
I'm terribly impatient for the next installment. Your characterization feels spot-on. Mal and Zoe have that unspoken understanding, but it's not as jaded as it becomes post-Serenity Valley. The explanation for how the hell Mal got a freaking nerve cluster moved holds up very nicely. I'm impressed. The only thing I wonder at is Zoe brushing back Mal's hair and taking his hand. They're never very physical with each other, so this surprised me.
Anyway, lovely job.

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