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Saved You in the War 1/3

Friday, February 23, 2007

Mal and Zoe hone their Big Damn Hero skills saving each other in the war. This is a three-part story inspired by the line in War Stories. It was originally going to be part of my extraordinarily long POW story The Losing Side (as a flashback), but in an effort to focus that tale a little bit I decided to take it out and post it seperately.

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"Sarge?”

“Yes, Zoe?” Mal grunted.

“You got something sticking out of your back,” she yelled, making herself heard through the thunder of artillery fire.

“Oh, never mind that,” replied Mal. “That’s just my new piercing, got it done the other day.”

“Well, it’s proving a little inconvenient, sir, it keeping you from walking and all,” she commented dryly.

“Sorry. Just my way of expressin’ my individuality,” replied Mal with a grin, his face contorting with pain at the slight movement.

Zoe rolled her eyes. Any retort would have been drowned out by the earth-shattering explosion of nearby mortar fire, and she merely crawled to Mal’s side to inspect the wound. After a few seconds, she took Mal’s hand gently in hers and shouted for the radio operator. “We need a medevac, now!”

Mal peered around at her uneasily. “Medevac and now ain’t terribly reassuring words to hear about yourself in the same sentence. You entirely certain that’s necessary, Corporal?”

Zoe raised her eyebrows as she withdrew the injector from her field kit and pressed it against Mal’s arm, giving him a heavy dose of pain meds. “Forgive me if I made the mistaken assumption you might want the use of your legs sometime in the future. That piece of shrapnel tore the hell out of your back, an’ it’s gonna take a lot more than a field hospital to put you back together again.”

“Fine,” muttered Mal, tightening his grip on her hand.

The radio operator ran up and crouched beside Mal. “Sir, we got orders to fall back, it’s too hot in here to hold and the Alliance has more air support on the way, they’ll wipe us out any minute now. Closest a medevac ship’ll land is about a quarter mile from here, but –“

“But hauling an injured man’ll slow you down an’ we’ll all die, that the gist of it?” asked Mal bluntly.

“Yes – sir,” said the young man uncertainly. Steadying his voice firmly, he said, “We ain’t gonna leave you, Sarge. We’ll get you out of here.”

“No, you ain’t,” said Mal firmly. “Take the men and fall back. Pir

Comments
Saturday, 24 February 2007 01:53
You really have gotten the heart and soul of Zoe and Mal's relationship. This is brilliant.
Saturday, 24 February 2007 01:55
What a fine side-ways addition to "The Losing Side"! Your banter back and forth between Mal and Zoe was right on target for character and their 'voices'. I'm interested in where this tale is going and how it ties to Losing Side.
Saturday, 24 February 2007 04:41
Crap...my original comment got ate:)

Well...to reiterate:

1) So glad you made these Mal/Zoe moments separate, cuz they are sooo worth the indepedent posting;

2) Can't wait to see how Mal rescues Zoe, cuz it's bound to be crazy brilliant:D

BEB
Saturday, 24 February 2007 07:12
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Saturday, 24 February 2007 17:41
Absolutely brilliant! I love how superbly you depict Mal and Zoe's relationship. The gritty loyalty they hold to each other, through thick and thin. I am guessing this is also where the bundle of nerves in Mal's back got damaged, as mentioned by Mal to the Operative in the BDM "Serenity". Lovely work, hope there is more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 25 February 2007 04:12
Brings to mind another precious Mal/Zoe moment.

"You'll be cleaning latrines with your face for a month..."

This is a nice side-bar. Keep it up.


Rob O.
Monday, 26 February 2007 02:49
can't wait to see the rest! keep it coming... "Just my way of expressin’ my individuality," cracked me up!

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