Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

The Losing Side, chapter 36

Wednesday, February 14, 2007

As the commander of the POW camp gets some disturbing news about Mal, Straaker returns from solitary confinement.....and violence ensues.

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Mal let out an enthusiastic whoop as he caught the ball and moved to return it to Wash, exhilarated by his newly regained freedom. The Eyebrow hadn’t bothered to show up with the guards who entered without fanfare to release Mal and Gray and return life to normal in 28A, and the occupants were unabashedly enjoying themselves. Wash grinned in delight as Gray ran up from behind Mal and snatched the ball away, triggering Mal to race after him in mock indignation. Mal caught him in a few strides and wrestled his prize back, turning to toss it back to Wash.

He stopped in his tracks, suddenly uneasy as he noticed their day shift guard was leaning on the gate, watching. The officer had a genuinely happy grin on his face, and he gave Mal a cheerfully sheepish look as the two caught each other unawares. Shaking his head, the man turned and walked away.

“See?” said Wash with a smile as he looked affectionately at Mal. “Told ya’ they weren’t all bastards.”

Mal grinned back. “It’s a good day,” he said with a satisfied nod as he bounced the ball back to Wash.

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Mathew Lee took a deep breath as he opened the file, scanning the list of names and dates resignedly. Most of the inmates on the list were unfamiliar to him, but the very first made the knot in his stomach tighten unpleasantly. He contemplated silently for several minutes before tapping the name on the screen. Reynolds, Malcolm, Sgt. This has got to be some cruel joke of the universe, he thought, standing and looking out at the massive prison through the window. Buildings and yards and people stretched out further than he could see. Why this guy? Out of the thousands who could have been on that list, why in the name of Murphy’s law did it have to be him?

He returned to his desk and buried himself in research and reports, organizing data even though he knew that all too soon he’d run out of reasons to put off breaking the news, hoping that some bureaucratic hun dahn would grow a conscience in the 11th hour.

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Comments
Wednesday, 14 February 2007 11:53
Oh, the plot thickens!

I have to say, I look forward to each chapter with bated breath.
Wednesday, 14 February 2007 11:58
Jetflair,
Thay was dark anf I think more is coming. Excellent writing!
Wednesday, 14 February 2007 13:02
There it is. The inevitable confrontation with Straeker. I like how you handled it. Funny how "by the book" a man can be who's never had to think for himself in a combat situation. That's when you realize "the book" is only a foundation. Eventually you need to adapt to the situation you find yourself in.

Mal showed his true leadership quality in this chapter, immediately putting Straeker down before his words could further demoralize the prisoners. No hesitation. That's one of Mal's greatest qualities.

Keep it up.


Rob O.
Wednesday, 14 February 2007 17:04
Loved this but oh my am I holding my breath at the bad news Lee is going to have to pass on to Mal at some point. Why can't they just leave him and the others the gorram alone? After all, war is over and the rutting Alliance won. Your writing is brilliant as ever and this chapter was even better than the last few. Utterly excellent! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 15 February 2007 01:32
Oh...why do I get the feeling that Lee's news to Mal is about either his home being glassed back to go se OR he's been tapped as an example and scheduled for execution. Cuz those two scenarios seem to jump out as probable situations:(

Still...this was a freakin' brilliant chapter, jetflair! Especially in the end, where you actually give us a reason to feel just the tiniest bit of pity for him because of what being a "good" officer has netted him. That and Mal's brilliant bit of work concerning Straaker's actions. Definitely know I would follow Mal into Hell:D

BEB
Saturday, 17 February 2007 05:00
What?? What about Mal on the list???? I must know, really I must. This is a great story arc-- I started reading it and couldn't stop. Pleeeeeeease continue!
Saturday, 24 February 2007 02:05
Absolutely delicious hint of ominous in this chapter!

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