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Firefly Season 2:1 The Wreck Part 1

Tuesday, January 16, 2007

When Serenity discovers a drifting alliance ship the crew try to lift illegal Cargo but nothing is easy in the 'verse

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Writers Notes:- based on the line of thought that the BDM is in an alternate universe – this is proved by the fact that in the movie Simon busts river out of the academy himself instead of as stated in the TV series as the underground movement contacted by Simon breaks river out (probably in the cryo box) in return for funding.

A 2nd season of episodes starting with this episode The Wreck

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Teaser- a large alliance ship (size of a cruiser – looks like a cross between a space station and a ship) travelling through space

- 4 years ago –

Alliance scientists are walking through white, clean, shiny corridors and pass a flustered scientist and an Alliance officer – they nod to the Head scientist and continue, leaving the scientist to try to keep up with the officers pace.

“He’s like nothing we’ve ever accomplished – you can forget the cyber research with those animals…”

(Indicates a side corridor)

“…this subject is perfect”

‘is that so? I was told there have been difficulties – he rejected the chip!’

The alliance officer is not as optimistic as the scientist

“I admit there have been … problems – the subject is insane because of the treatments – he’s a danger to everyone it can reach”

‘there has been success at controlling insanity in other projects’

“this is different the techniques used have been different to neurological surgery despite having the same basis”

The officer stops abruptly and turns to look at the scientist

Realising mistake “the treatments involved bring the subject to the brink of death and back again and is completely different to creating a psychic in fact we made certain he wasn’t a psychic”

They start walking again

‘The other test subjects’

“didn’t survive”

‘and the problem?’

“its like we’ve induced schizophrenia, the insane section of his psyche is separate and usually dominant over the remaining part of his original personality”

Pauses

“the sane part will be easy to manipulate but the insane part is a tougher entity…”

Fearfully

Comments
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 11:19
what do you think?

anyone spot any errors just let me know -feedback is appreciated
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 12:11
I do like this, jearaxus, and can't help the feeling of foreboding creeping over me at the thought of that huge Alliance vessel just seemingly dead in space. Hmmm. You ask about any errors, mostly they are spelling ones the one that had me creased up was 'scitsophrania'. The correct spelling is 'schizophrenia'. If you use spell check or a beta that will tidy up very nicely for you. Can't wait to see what happens next! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 12:12
Ooops sorry, slipped on a key while typing jeraxus. Keep with the writing, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 17 January 2007 22:57
Mighty shiny stuff you got here, jeraxus...though you really need a beta reader to help clear up spelling goofs and some rough formatting. Spent more than one moment wracking my brain to decide who was saying what and when :(

But the core idea and setup? Just brilliant! Can't wait to see what part 2 brings;)

BEB

P.S. Being mindful that the following is my personal view, but...the movie ain't AU, jeraxus. Joss compressed basically what was supposed to be the 2nd season into a 2-hour movie, so Simon's little action hero moment at the Academy? Canonical, but confusing when you compare it to Simon's remarks in the pilot episode. Either it's Joss retconning (i.e. retroactively altering a plot point or idea to make things more interesting) or Joss intended to go back and explore why Simon lied to the crew when he said he paid rebels to break River out but acutally did the retrieval himself;)
Saturday, 20 January 2007 20:43
pretttty cool
Though I too had wasted a few minutes on tryin to figure out who was sayin what.

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