Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Down the Rabbit Hole- Chapter One

Tuesday, January 2, 2007

Mal and Simon have a misadventure. A little danger, lots of snark. Not slash. First chapter of I'm not sure how many. My first time posting a fic here, encouraged by <b>anjulie</b> and by <b>2x2</b>, who led by the example of her brilliant fic
<a href="http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5922"Choices</a>. (Archived here and sooo worth your time.)
PG for violence and cussing.
Not mine, all belongs to Joss.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4191    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Zoe! Heat her up and run, ma shong! All the way out of orbit!”

Mal’s forearm slammed Simon back against a wall as they waited for the cover of the panicked crowd surging in their direction. As soon as the runners reached them, Mal pulled Simon into the center of the stampede while continuing to bark orders into his com.

“Someone fingered the doc, we’re goin’ underground! Who the gorram else would it be? You head for the moon. Giacomo’s yard. Keep tabs on the Cortex, send a shuttle back soon as you think it’s safe!”

Simon struggled to keep his feet, jostling and being jostled in turn as the afternoon throng fled the gunfire that had erupted in the marketplace. Gunfire that had been aimed at them. At him.

“No,” Mal spared Simon a glance as they ran. “he’s fine. Do not let anyone try to contact us. You keep my ship outta trouble or there’ll be hell to pay!” Threats finished, Mal stuffed the com in his pocket. “Time to jump off the train, Doc! Go left!”

Simon split off from the dwindling pack to find himself in a small sidestreet, Mal on his heels. “Don’t stop!” Mal panted, his head twisting to take in the buildings on either side of them and the few other refugees who had taken the same turn. “Up here.”

He steered them into an alley, and Simon, winded, rested gratefully against the brick wall, some part of him noting with satisfaction that the captain was as short of breath as he.

“Thank you for the exercise, Doc.” Mal bent forward, hands on his knees. “Think I might take a pass next time, just the same.”

“What now?”

Mal looked skyward, and tilted his head as though listening. “When I said underground, wasn’t a figure of speech. Wouldn’t expect a rock this remote to have Air Search to call out, but then I wasn’t counting on a town square full a purplebellies, neither. For whatever reason, the population here has changed, and it sure ain’t in our favor.” He watched two teens run past on the street. “I figure we’re ‘bout three quarters of a mile out o

Comments
HORATIOFROG
Tuesday, 02 January 2007 02:19
I'm very intregued. Love the line about Jayne and his favorite date! :)

So what trouble looms ahead? There's always something to make it "not smooth"... ;)

Tuesday, 02 January 2007 03:18
Phenomenal beginning!! I love it when a story begins right in the middle of a frack... a fraka... a fraekas... you know, a big damn tumultuous situation. (sorry, spell-check failed) I can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the excellent writing.


"Some of our jobs are a bit more interesting than others'."

Rob O.
Tuesday, 02 January 2007 10:17
Excellent. Now I am trying to remember where the good gorram I read this before, I love it as much now as I did then, just hope you mean to keep posting chapters here now you've started. Can't wait for the next part! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 02 January 2007 18:02
weee, this is fun! Excellent start, great dialogue and thanks for the "Not slash" header, cause I might have suspected... ;)

And of course the complaint this one earns is... Not long enough!!! I hope more follows quickly for those of us with short memories.
Wednesday, 03 January 2007 02:18
I've been rading this over on Livejournal and LOVED it - so glad to see it here also. Can hardly wait to see how you get them out of this mess.
Thursday, 04 January 2007 05:47
It's "fracas," HeWhoKicksAlot...and it definitely was one of the bigger brouhahas the crew has gotten themselves involved in, I must say;)

Really can't wait to see more, cuz if you're working on doing something like 2x2's "Choices"...then we got some seriously shiny work ahead to read ;D

BEB

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