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The Losing Side, chapter 29

Tuesday, October 3, 2006

Khiloh's son is still fighting for life, and much to Wash and Mal's dismay some of the other prisoners decide to try an escape attempt.

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“So. News?” asked Mal softly. Khiloh looked like he’d been fighting a war; his eyes were bloodshot and weary, his posture limp and uncoordinated. Mal imagined he hadn’t gotten any sleep since they’d talked the evening before. There was a faint look of hope on his exhausted face as he raised his head.

“He’s still alive.” Khiloh leaned against the gate for support, his eyes drifting momentarily closed. “He’s still alive,” he muttered in a daze.

“That’s good,” said Wash, reaching through the gate and rubbing his exhausted friend’s shoulder comfortingly.

“They found it,” said Khiloh, forcing his eyes open. “What’s wrong – they said they found what’s wrong with him.” He fell silent.

“Yes?” prompted Wash.

“Huh?” said Khiloh, blinking. “Oh, uh, sorry. Uh, sleepy virus. I mean – oh, guys, I’m sorry. I can’t talk.”

“Hey, it’s okay,” said Wash. “Those sleepy viruses can be nasty.” There was a gently understanding grin on his face.

Khiloh chuckled. “I – got the can’t talk straight virus.” His face sobered. “My son’s got something the doctors never seen before, um, some new virus. They’re synafiz – synsatiz – synthesizing an antiviral for it right now.”

“And – they can save him with that?” asked Mal.

Khiloh nodded. “If –“ he closed his eyes, his voice breaking. “If they can keep him alive that long.” He was crumpled against the fence, completely unguarded. Today there was no energy for joking around about escapes; the young man was far too exhausted.

He lifted his head in a daze. “They need to keep him alive- need to keel – keep – him alive for another day, until its ready. If he lives until then, the – stuff – will save him.”

“That’s good,” said Mal, echoing Wash’s words. “Very good. So – when are these tā māde niao goushi duī employing you gonna realize you’re half dead, let you take a day off? You’re in no shape to be here.”

Khiloh just nodded silently, and Mal and Wash exchanged pained looks. Khiloh pulled his frame upright with obviou

Comments
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 17:53
Oh damn....this doesn't bode well. Either Lee's gonna have to come down on Mal and Wash's housing block for this...or Gray and Straaker are gonna get seriously wailed on for this stunt :(

BEB
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 22:08
I'm hoping Gray and Straaker get solitary confinement, preferrably in a block with walls solid enough that no one else has to hear them. And I sure hope Kiloh's son pulls through. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 22:08
Aahh, Straeker fetches a beat-down. I've been waiting for that. I like the fact that Wash follow's Mal's example, which hopefully saves his posterior.

Keep up the excellent writing.

"You know what the chain of command is? It's the chain I go get and beat you with til you realize who's in ruttin' command."

Rob O.
Monday, 16 October 2006 14:32
Wow! Just...wow. Very gripping. I was right there with them, struggling to remain calm, fighting the fear, hoping it would end without tragedy. Well done!

"I love my captain."

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