The scars on Malcolm Reynolds body read like a topographical timeline of his life. A childhood fall onto a woodpile, shrapnel from his first tour of duty, Atherton Wing’s sword. All of these scars marked important events that impacted on both his life and his skin.
Inara Serra’s body was perfect. Save for one birthmark on her upper left thigh, her skin was smooth and unmarked.
Then again, the most painful scars are often the ones that can’t be seen.
When Inara saw Mal leaving Nandi’s room in the early morning hours, dressing as he went, her heart cracked. Joy and light poured out, leaving pain and jealousy behind.
“So you’re okay?” He had asked.
She had lied to him that day, not that it was anything new but watching how embarrassed and concerned he was for her feelings closed the gash enough to keep her heart from breaking outright.
Later that day, above Serenity’s cargo bay, Inara evened the score.
“I’m leaving.”
Two words split Mal’s already wounded heart clear down the middle. The look of pain and the tears in her eyes cauterized his wound just enough to keep his heart from disappearing entirely, once and for all.
From then on, whenever they were near to each other, their hearts ached with a sensation neither one of them could fully explain, nor knew the other felt.
Two imperfect hearts silently calling for each other, looking for it’s other half.
Two damaged hearts aching to be made whole.
Beautifully written!
You can't take the sky from me
Definitely love the "heartbreaks with a twist" motif you got going on here...how their hearts break in the same episode but are saved from complete emotional destruction because of their mutual desire to not hurt each other intentionally:D
BEB
It's the subtle things like, "tears in her eyes" and "concern in his voice", that keep this two from completely breaking. You've conveyed that nicely here.
To say that Inara shouldn't be hurt or jealous because she's a prostitute devalues her as a person. Isn't that what Mal does when he calls her a whore?
At the end of "Heart of Gold", Mal was finally ready to admit what he had been holding back for so long, and Inara cut him off at the knees because she just couldn't do it.
And Mal and Nandi actually did make a connection, and Inara knew it--that's why she cried, not because of the physical act they shared, but because she knew it actually did mean something, unlike when she took to bed with clients.
You captured all that beautifully in a short piece.
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