Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Even Warrior Women Get the Blues

Friday, May 18, 2007

Written for LJ community FF_Friday. The prompt was "reunion". I have been meaning to write a post-BDM Wash/Zoe thing for some time. This is my first fic in five months, so feedback would be good.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2822    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Zoë tried to open her eyes and found the normally simple task too difficult to accomplish. She could hear a voice. Faint, but audible.

"Zoë."

That voice.

Her eyes stung.

Her heart leapt.

She found her strength, and swung.

"Zoë."

This is no kinda joke...

"Zoë."

This was torture...

"Zoë."

This was war...

"Zoë. Zoë, listen. I fly, baby. I know math and maps and plans. That's what I do. I know this isn't safe and I know it isn't a plan. But I don't need safe. I don't need sane. And I would follow you into that hole on Hera and back if it meant I got to keep you with me."

Her fists froze up as the rest of her warmed. No one else knows that. I never told anyone how he proposed. It has to be him.

Wash?

"There ya are. Hey you." Wash took the opportunity to take her hands in his. It was as much for safety as it was sentimentality.

Wash, really? How is it...

He shushed her as she opened her eyes. Her gaze fell on the center of his chest. Instinctively, she loosened her hand from his and touched him. He was solid, the muscles tensing under her hand as he laughed. "Yup, it's me, baby. All here."

You can still laugh.

Zoë looked up to meet his eyes, but her gaze froze just beneath his nose.

You grew that mo min chi meow moustache back?

"Huh?" Wash asked, confused. His eyes crossed trying to see what she was talking about. "Oh, I forgot," he said peeling it off. "No, I just knew you were coming. Wanted to make sure I had your attention."

Laughter. It feels nice. It feels nice here.

Wash stood and offered his hand to help her up. "Come on. I'll show you around."

Zoë looked at his hand and made a face. Wash smiled as she gracefully eased herself up off the floor of the white room they were in. Wash just shook his head. "My Zoë."

She took his still outstretched hand and he led her out a doorway without a door.

Wash...this is. This is what you always wanted.

The wate

Comments
Friday, 18 May 2007 04:08
:gasps: Lovely. I normally don't read or like post-BDM stuff....I'm in denial. But this was a very sweet story.
Friday, 18 May 2007 06:10
Oh that's nice. Sad and sweet, and then it hurt and then it didn't hurt.
Friday, 18 May 2007 11:22
Oh wow, this was fabulous but such a wrench to the heart and soul. Poor Zoe, but from another angle I do hope that in her Near Death Experience she really did see Wash again. To know on some level that he still exists on another plane of existence and will be waiting for her when her time comes has to be some comfort. Wonderful writing now pass the tissues! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 18 May 2007 21:52
I don't normally read Wash/Zoe, but this was sweet and beautiful. As with most W/Z stuff it was also bittersweet.
Saturday, 19 May 2007 04:20
Some utterly fantastic work here, Girlaskew! All kinds of bittersweet...but the setup is saved by immediately having the two of them pick up their beautifully realized relationship and just...flow. There's pretty much zero denial on Zoe's part and the transition back to the "real" world was superbly handled:)

BEB
Monday, 27 August 2007 16:48
OOooh, that was painful and yet it felt so true. I like that I could almost feel the sun and sand the way you described them, an then the slide back into reality. Very bittersweet, as BEB said!

:-)

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