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From Bad to Worse, pt 09

Friday, August 25, 2006

Mal, Zoe, and Jayne come to the rescue, and backup from the engine room arrives.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3453    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This is a short one, but the next and final one should tie everything up nicely.

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pt 01,pt 02,pt 03,pt 04,pt 05,pt 06,pt 07,pt 08

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The lone commando noticed Serenity approaching, though he could do nothing to speed up his escape process. The net contained a very strong current, and once it was grounded it took a gradual decrease to release the connection to the land. He started the de-activation sequence, attempting to force it to move faster by increasing the power to the engines. As he felt the ship slowly begin to pull away from the ground, he realized too late what the approaching vessel planned to do. Releasing his restraining harness, he bolted for the side door, grabbing a parachute pack and breathing mask before throwing himself out of it.

Wash continued to fly Serenity over the smaller ship as he saw the man jump out from the side of it, turning the side thrusters downward toward it. The expulsion from the thrusters forced the ship downward, the resulting tangent with the fading net pulling it forward. The ship continued downward on a parabolic collision course with the ground five yards away from the parked Alliance patrol boat, causing the two guards stationed there to dive for cover.

Wash expertly landed Serenity on the opposite side of the other Firefly from the patrol ship moments later, with Mal, Zoe, and Jayne at the sides of the cargo bay ramp, guns drawn as they scanned for the guards outside of both ships.

“Gorramit, they all got real guns this time,” Jayne half-whispered, dropping the binoculars from his eyes. “Gotta take ‘em down fast.”

Mal nodded to him, signaling him to move out of the front door toward a medium-sized rock for cover. Several shots ricocheted

Comments
Wednesday, 30 August 2006 04:30
Oh boy...things have really gotten pear-shaped fast;(

Still...loving this series mucho grander, River..Goddess:D

BEB
Thursday, 31 August 2006 18:04
You write action real well. I'm envious! The whole opening sequence, down to the piloting of the ships was so well described.

I am rather torn if I'd like to see Claire die or not, though. Heh.

These chapters are way short, but that's ok, because I've missed the last three because I was on vacation and I get to read them all at once :P

Saturday, 23 September 2006 21:13
Intelligently written, very visual and Asimovish: "Wash continued to fly Serenity over the smaller ship as he saw the man jump out from the side of it, turning the side thrusters downward toward it. The expulsion from the thrusters forced the ship downward, the resulting tangent with the fading net pulling it forward. The ship continued downward on a parabolic collision course with the ground five yards away from the parked Alliance patrol boat, causing the two guards stationed there to dive for cover."

Love this Jayne line: “Gorramit, they all got real guns this time,” Jayne half-whispered, dropping the binoculars from his eyes. “Gotta take ‘em down fast.”~~Can see him, hear him, almost. It's that vivid.

One of the best gun battles I've ever read, comes next. :0)

More shivers @ the good-natured nasty comments during torturing Claire. Good on her for the stoic face, but DANG! New nose making? yikes...

Yah ended this with MUCHO suspense, Jayne-Man. I'm thanking you for the bright yellow Part 10 link there, or else I'd be dying for resolution.

Good fic. Glad you ain't addicted to feedback since the mooks ain't reading or commenting on anybody's fic like they should.

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