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Episode 15 - You Can't Go Home Again: Part 6 of 6

Monday, June 26, 2006

The crew get their "cargo" but where's Mal?

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http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=11178&nid=16105>From Bad to Worse: by RiverIsMyGoddess <---companion piece to this

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“I'm leaning towards the side of believin' you.” Claire was standing outside the small cell she'd locked Mal into.

“Could it possibly be because I'm telling the truth?” He asked without looking up.

“That and everyone's well awares of Frank bein' a wife beater. Hell I wouldn't'a been surprised to see him have a small accident at home. Don't think I'd a brought Anna in for questioning either.” She un-holstered her gun and set it on the table.

Mal raised his head carefully, not enough to see her face. Instead he sat watching her movements, doing his best to keep his mixed emotions from surfacing. “Why you doing this then? My crew won't leave without me. If Anna's going to get away, then sooner would be better.” He could hear annoyance in his voice and he mentally kicked himself for his inability to remain stoic.

“Mal, we stopped Anna on her way to your ship. She was carrying 7,000 on her. She'd cleaned out their savings. Now as I see it you can do one of two things. Call your crew and tell them to leave, Anna leaves with them and every thing's all fine. Or you can refuse to tell your crew to leave and Anna doesn't get to leave, which as we both know is a recipe for unpleasantness.”

Mal continued staring at the wall, utterly confounded by her suggestions. “Either way I'm rotting in this cell. So why should I care?”

“Because you do Mal, I know you. Probably better then any of your so called crew, and you'd gladly sit in that cell and rot, then let Anna and her critters get beaten by that hun dan.”

Ma

Comments
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 03:01
Wow. This was mesmerising. I really felt like it was an episode from the series. Congratulations! I can't wait for Episode 16 "What about Cobb?"
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 03:45
You should title this one Episode 15: You can never go Home Again, and then title the next Episode 16: What About Cobb.

Just a suggestion.

This was good. And that's saying something as I usually only read S/K heavy fics:)

MCQ
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 04:47
Nicely done. Just as a Firefly episode leaves you wanting more, so does this fic. Doesn't end out as all hope but it all comes together and things turn out - for the most part - back to normal.
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 14:38
Poor Mal - getting his heart pulled all over the place! Looking forward to the next episode!

-mal4prez
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 16:14
Wonderful ending to this little story, and just about as long as an FF episode. Now I need to get off my ass and finish mine.

I loved the interaction between Mal and Claire in the jail, and her letting him go is a good sign of her love for him.

Can't wait to read the next episode.
KITKAT
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 16:24
this has been your best work...momma and i both loved it.


kitkat

Friday, 07 July 2006 05:14
Hmm...honestly, I think Mal could give Spike serious competition for the title of "Love's Bitch" right about now...got one woman pretty much begging to be with him that he doesn't feel the same way about anymore, and another has mirroring issues about commitment that makes her run from something that could be so good...

Yep...gotta read "all about cobb" now;)

BEB

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