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Wish Upon A Ship

Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Simon/Kaylee. Missing scene from Our Mrs. Reynolds.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3214    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: I realize you all might have been hoping for the final installment of “Six More Weeks of Winter” but I must report that this little one shot wouldn't get out of my head and so here it is for your enjoyment. Simon being a “smooth playa”

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“Do you think they can see us from here?” Simon's voice was barely above a whisper as he leaned towards Kaylee who was sitting next to him on the cold hull above the bridge of Serenity.

“It ain't like any of um' would think to look. Top of Serenity's not usually were people enjoy the fun of a shindig.” She smiled at him sheepishly and wrapped the blanket tighter around her. It had been her idea to watch the celebration on Lilac from on top of the ship. A fresh warrant had come out on the cortex that very morning so River and Simon were ship bound. So instead of missing out on the festivities Kaylee had suggested their current perch as a possible place to enjoy the mood and music. Simon turned his head and looked back at River who was back quite a ways on a more flat surface, dancing her sweet little heart out. His heart warmed to see his sister happy.

“She's so pretty. The way she moves, it's ain't like anything I ever saw before.” Simon hadn't noticed Kaylee also looking back at River and he smiled as he watched her eyes dance along with River.

“Yes she is,” Simon said softly, his heart aching with sorrow for the life his sister should have had. He looked back at the townsfolk dancing and playing music, trying to ignore the sudden pang in his chest. The people below seemed so joyous and Mal had even joined in the festivities, dancing with a young woman whose short hair gleamed in the fire's glow.

Simon's gaze drifted up to the blanket of stars above him. They didn't seem to glow so brightly back home. Not like here, it was like trying to count the grains of sand on a beach just to look upwards and imagine how many points of light shimmered above him. A streak of light suddenly dashed across the sea of stars and he closed his eyes. It may ha

Comments
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 22:12
aww, this is such a nice little missing scene. I always wondered why River and Simon weren't at the little party in that episode!
MCQ
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 22:15
Very nice. You capture Simon's frustration towards his emotions for Kaylee very nicely. Well done!!
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 22:31
Sweet. Poor Simon! I'm glad I finally know what Simon, Kaylee and River were doing during the party.
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 22:36
this was very nice and cute. And well written....
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 23:24
I love it. It's so in character too. I could see that happening exactly. You have a great grasp of the characters.
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 23:31
AWWW That was so cute! You know how I love missing scenes, and this one was great! I loved that Simon knocked his elbow on top of Kaylee's head, making her bite her tongue! Love hurts!
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 00:22
It would have been amusing for Kaylee to have a lisp on that episode...
Don't laugh at the elbow thing...it happens... Just as well he didn't try for a foot massage...
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 01:21
do not panic! I writing it, it's just going to take time to get it write
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 01:47
Loved Simon's closing thought. Yup, a boob but we still love him. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 03:19
Cute!
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 14:45
Oh yes, priceless ... do we know for sure that Kaylee is from Harvest? I'm working on a story right now and I kinda need to know.

But I loved this and how Simon is so trying to be suave and failing so spectacularly! We can't say the boy doesn't excel at most things ...
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 23:27
wow, my first oneshot seems to have garnered such lovely feedback.

Sad thing... I was so excited to do a one shot and now I can think of 5 different ways to carry this on. *sigh*
Thursday, 25 May 2006 05:05
Great work here, Silly...Duck! Loved Simon's unintentional injury to Kaylee due to bad timing:P

BEB
Thursday, 25 May 2006 11:24
If you can think of ways to carry it on, then do so. Make a longer story out of it.

Very good Simon and Kaylee voices, and yay for River happily dancing away.
Saturday, 10 June 2006 05:30
Oh Simon, there ain't a power in the 'verse that can save him from making an ass of himself.

Great work!

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