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Episode 15 - You Can't Go Home Again: Part 1 of 6

Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Mal goes back to Shadow and recieves a less then warm welcome. Simon/Kaylee at the end. Set after OiS, this whole episode is suppose to be like it was just the next episode in the series.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3524    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: This was a fic Riverismygoddess and I talked about, we decided to each take a few basic story elements and do with it what we like. See how different they end up. This is my version.

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=11178&nid=16105>From Bad to Worse: by RiverIsMyGoddess

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“Are you sure you really want to go back Sir?” Zoe didn't often question Mal and it took him a moment to recover.

“There's no need to talk about it anymore. I've been avoiding it since before the war but we're too hard up to pass up this job. It's legal and should go smooth.” He walked up the stairs onto the bridge and smacked Wash on the back in an over zealous attempt to be optimistic. “Set course for Shadow.”

“Smooth.” Zoe's doubtful voice sounded in his mind like an omen.

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Mal was standing outside a tall run down wooden barn. He ran his hand slowly along one of the large doors, it's bottom hinge had rotted out and the door didn't move easily. It was already ajar and so instead of trying to move it he slipped right inside. It took a moment for his eyes to adjust to the dim barn interior after the bright afternoon sun, but it wasn't too long before he could make out the familiar setting. He stepped in further surveying the dilapidated condition surrounding him.

He once again began to run his hand across the half rotted wood.

“Thought you might make your way down here.” He turned around quickly from the stable he'd been looking at and didn't see anything, for a moment he questioned actually hearing the voice. Being in a place like this could scare up more then a few memories. Then through the long shafts of particle filled light bursting through the cracks in the wood he saw the silhouette of the reason he'd been avoiding Shadow.

“It is home,” he said perhaps too brightly in an attempt to sound nonchalant.

“I want you off this rock, Reynolds.” The voice was confident, like it was used to getting what it asked for.

“Claire, how you been?”

“Get off this rock

Comments
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 16:00
*My sister using my bed to put regurgitated apple bits on, is a bother to me.*

Excellent ^line^.

It seems like you left something off, or didn't past the piece in it's entirety.
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 16:15
Okay you got me, left of the last bit w/ Inara and Zoe

yeah I like the apple bits line too
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 23:22
Very good, I loved this but poor Mal. That guy just never gets a break. And Simon, getting the wrong end of the stick as usual but at least that is all cleared up again with Kaylee. Can't wait for more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 01:08
Another great story of yours!

I never get tired of seeing your work, it always manages to re-invent itself. You're brilliant and I can't wait to read more of this!
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 01:41
A very good start. Poor, poor Mal. And poor Simon, putting his foot in his mouth again. But at least he managed to get it right at the end. More soon?
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 04:10
Well I'm glad Simon didn't put his foot in his mouth! He was starting to get better with that in OiS so I'm glad to see you continue with that here.

And the Inara/ Zoe conversation . . . hmm, nice and mysterious....poor Inara
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 16:52
^ sorry, above was me, just didn't acknowledge me for some reason :(
Thursday, 15 June 2006 06:49
Ya know..."Shadow" fics are always interesting, regardless of who writes them. I think mainly cuz we have no proof that the Ballad of Serenity refers to violent events that made Shadow and other plans inhospitable or not.

I mean...some Browncoats wanna make Shadow a giant ball of slag floating in space from Alliance vengeance or natural disaster. Probably cuz it makes Mal seem more human to think his home is completely gone. No chance of reunions or returns or nothing. Others like yourself, SillyLittleDuck, wanna allow Mal a chance to deal with the changes that have come in his life via reunions and returns. Can't really say where I sit on the matter...honestly would prefer a ruling from Joss on that piece of canon;)

Still...this is some mighty lovely writing you have here. Can't wait for more:D

BEB
Wednesday, 21 June 2006 01:02
This was good, sorry didn't leave feedback when i first read it but i really like the direction this could take.
KITKAT
Friday, 23 June 2006 18:41
oh ducky i loved it.....Liam saw an alliance soldier aiming right at Mal, and Liam pushed Mal out of the way. Took a bullet for him, died in Mal's arms. Liam's last words were 'Forgive me for loving her.made me cry....so sweet...and the part with simon and kaylee fussing was so real...icould hear em like they were right in my room......i really really loved it....
MADDADDAM
Thursday, 29 June 2006 18:42
Ducky...what a treat!! every scene literally glowed...so we don't have Season Two to put in the DVD player, but, gorram it, we've got this....and THIS....these vivid moments with all our loved crew living through these words, is real....damned....close!!

Thank you Duck

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