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Episode 15 - You Can't Go Home Again: Part 5 of 6

Friday, June 23, 2006

Mal is a BDH, and it comes back to bite him in the butt.

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http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=11178&nid=16105>From Bad to Worse: by RiverIsMyGoddess <---companion piece to this

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“You ready to leave everything and everyone you've ever known?” Mal was standing in Anna's kitchen, helping her pack up some meager belongings.

“I only need my kids Mal, everything else,” her voice broke. She didn't look up from the dishes she'd insisted on washing. “Well I can't look around here and see a single thing I wouldn't give up for them.” Mal didn't respond, knowing that despite what she said, it was killing her to leave. He just picked up the two bags she'd brought downstairs containing the kids personal items and carried them out into the backyard to the awaiting mule.

Zoe was standing guard when Mal came outside with the bags, Jayne was stationed in the front while Wash and Kaylee had stayed on the ship to make sure they could get a quick get away if they needed one.

“You think she's going to be able to do it, Sir?” Zoe asked once again as she studied her surroundings.

“It's what she's been trained in since she was 12, I hope that with that much work experience she can seduce some ugly middle-aged man who drunkenly beats his wife and kids.

“How you holdin' up?” Zoe asked finally looking at Mal. It wasn't like them to sit and talk about how they felt inside, but Zoe knew this wasn't easy for Mal.

“It's strange ya know. Growin' up I used to look up to Frank. I wanted him to marry my ma for a while. He was way too young of course but I couldn't see that. Just thought he'd be the kind of dad every kid would want.” Mal looked down at the bags he'd loaded into the mule. “Now I see him as unfit to have any contact with his kids.”

“People change Mal.”

“Yes t

Comments
Friday, 23 June 2006 19:12
Definitely keeping my attention with this story. Odd, huh? I usually just read S/K stuff:)

And now Claire...poor Mal just can't catch a break, can he? Even when trying to do something good and noble?
2X2
Friday, 23 June 2006 20:07
Ick! What a nasty job for Inara... and things alway do seem to go south...

I still feel a bit sorry for Frank, in a way, because he obviously does love his wife an' kids...

But poor Mal... Just exaclty what he needs... ai ya!
Saturday, 24 June 2006 01:12
Great job so far....keep it up.
MCQ
Saturday, 24 June 2006 05:04
This is playing out as if it were a lost episode of the series. Very FF-ish for things to not work out as planned. I do like where you're going with this and anticipate the ending. Keep it up!
2X2
Saturday, 24 June 2006 06:57
Anonymous: That's obviously not what I meant.. I was referring to the fact that he doesn't want to lose them... No, beating them is not right, and no they shouldn't stay with him... and I ain't saying it's any excuse whatsoever... which is why I said a *BIT* sorry... abusive people are pretty messed up, and often do love the ones they hurt... ain't sayin' it's right. they need help, and sometimes they just need to be put down...
Monday, 26 June 2006 01:50
*while he was talking about himself, Inara had long since learned it was everyone's favorite topic of conversation*

Loved that line, and so true.

I love that Mal saved the hwoon dan even though he was so horrible. And getting in trouble with Claire once more is just great, along the line of all of his other misadventures.

I can't wait for part 6.
KITKAT
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 16:23
loved the part about janes hat....he he


kitkat
Friday, 07 July 2006 05:06
Ya know...I bet Mal's a big proponent of the axiom "No good deed goes unpunished" right now, cuz he's screwed from all sides:(

And I am willing to bet that once Mal sees Inara, he's gonna wish he had aimed a might higher when firing on Frank;)

BEB

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