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Good Intensions Part Four

Thursday, April 13, 2006

Best to read from Good Intetions Part One-Three. Simon and Kaylee talk, they find out who was behind the plot to kill them and there's some Mal/Inara thrown in as well!

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Disclaimer: Not mine, just writing for fun.

A/N: This story has a life of it's own!!! It has run away and I have no control over it!! There is going to be at least another post and then an epilogue! Thanks to Leiasky for her inputs! Hope you guys like it and please comment!:D

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Simon hurried to catch up to the rest of the crew as they made their way through the docks. The port was all metal and piping, with dark hallways and lighting that barely worked, flickering off and on. It was a labyrinth that Simon didn’t want to get lost in, one turn looked as good as the next.

He darted around the dock workers and miners milling about the hallways and edged up to his sister just as Mal opened a side door marked Maintenance. The hallway was completely deserted, their footfalls thundered through the vacant space. Jayne took the rear, with Mal leading them down the corridor. Every door they passed all seemed the same, but Mal finally stopped as they rounded a corner. He pulled on the latch with some effort, the hinges squeaking as the door opened. Through the threshold they could see the little hallway was just as dark as the Black itself. The smell of stale alcohol and humanity at it’s worst filtered out, causing Simon to wrinkle his nose. Music and boisterous laughter drew Mal to the push aside the curtain at the end of the hallway, revealing a dingy, little dive filled with filthy miners and all the dregs of society a small outpost like the Whittier Spaceport could muster.

No one really noticed over the din of voices calling out to one another the five strangers that had wandered out of the back. Directly to their right was the bar and behind it, their contact, Reina Sellers.

Mal and company sidled up to the bar as Reina kept polishing the glassware in front of her.

“You must be chompin’ at the bit to get to this one, Malcolm Reynolds.”

She flashed him a pretty smile as she poured out five beers setting one in fron

Comments
Thursday, 13 April 2006 20:58
Oh, I don't even know how to tell you how much I loved this!

Simon getting all forceful when his family is in harms way was just perfect!

Simon and Kaylee's little talk was heartwrenching. They both have to leave! Where are they gonna go? Are they still wanted by the Alliance? After all this time? Ohh, I can't wait to find out!

Inara talking to Molly about men...god that was hysterical!

LOVED this! Post more soon!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 21:25
Whoooo, Simon kickin' some butt when his family's threatened? Yeah, sounds about right to me!

Plus, pissed off!Simon? Good Lord, that's just HOT.

Gawd, I want more of this. How is the rest of the crew gonna take the news?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 21:48
I never thought of Simon as the interrogator type. Very well done.
Thursday, 13 April 2006 22:14
I enjoyed this installment. There were lots of little character moments I liked, most noteably Inara talking to Molly about men. She's right. Molly is at about the age where its time to start trying to figure that out, haha. Seeing Simon get angry, it was interesting. He is a man of action, after all.

I look forward to this Zoe in a dress thing. It grabs my attention.
Friday, 14 April 2006 08:28
Well now...glad to see Simon finally giving as much as he's gotten in fights. Boy has gotten dumped on too much in his time with Serenity;)

And the Inara/Molly bit...pure genius!

BEB
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 03:36
Evil Simon is hot
Monday, 15 May 2006 21:37
The Inara/Molly is really great.

In fact, anything you write with Inara in it is making me smile!
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 18:27
*"Didn't tip."*

Heh, 'no ticket.'

Yay for Simon getting physical with Sueng.

The last bit of the 'interrogation' with River telling Simon she knew wo he worked for inside the bar, and Simon being aware of that fact, was classic.

Kaylee telling the folks fixing thee ship what to do was great too.

It's so very sad, Simon and Kaylee talking about leaving.

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