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Kiss

Tuesday, July 25, 2006

Kaylee fawns over injured Simon and then Jayne says something crude...as usual! Continuation of Wrong. S/K

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A/N: So here is the end of this little mini series inspired by Leiasky's poking and prodding! She had a big hand in this one, so thanks to her big time and being a fabulous beta! Hope you all like it and please comment!

Link to http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=11884>Wrong;. Continuation starting from http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=11637>Threesome;.

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#21 Kiss

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Simon leaned back in his chair and smiled as Kaylee made her way across the kitchen to bring him some soup she had made for them for lunch. Over the past few days Kaylee had been fawning over Simon unrelentingly, and though he usually tried to keep it to a minimum, he was taking great pleasure in the attention he was showered with by the pretty mechanic. His wrist had been healing nicely, and luckily the crew had been kind enough not to get themselves seriously injured, as he would be not quite up to snuff if surgery was needed.

Jayne looked up at the moony eyes Kaylee made at Simon as she set the bowl in front of him and sneered, "Must be nice havin' someone wait on ya hand and foot. 'Course I'm sure yer used to it, growin' up with maids and all. Thinkin' maybe we should get lil' Kaylee an outfit of her own, make ya feel right at home, huh?"

Kaylee threw Jayne a scathing glare as she took the seat next to Simon, "Hush Jayne, he's injured."

Jayne leaned back in his chair and eyed the young doctor as he took a spoonful of soup, trying his best to ignore the repulsive man seated across the dining table.

"Yeah, funny thing about that? We still haven't heard the story as to why you got yerself all gimpy. Got somethin' ta hide there, doc?"

Simon raised his head to face Jayne squarely, "I fell, and I would appreciate you keeping your lascivious ideas about how my injury occurred to yourself."

Jayne leaned forward, resting his elbows on the table, his leering grin making Simon shudder as to what would be coming out of his mouth next.

“C’mon now, tell the truth th

Comments
Tuesday, 25 July 2006 22:22
Aww, I kinda like Kaylee playing nurse to an injured Simon. He IS still injured. I think you should just keep going with it. You can't end this little series with an interrupted first kiss!

Jayne being crude is so perfect as is Kaylee's reaction because she feels guilty for hurting Simon. And, of course, I love Simon just not thinking and leaning forward to kiss her.

So glad you started working on these prompts too. They're coming along great!
Wednesday, 26 July 2006 03:25
Ack! I love it! HA ha ha! Soooo cute...
Wednesday, 26 July 2006 03:33
Perfect! I'm so glad Kaylee came clean and Simon let his emotions finally rule him, instead of his brain!

Awesome first kiss too ... makes you all warm and fuzzy! More please!
Thursday, 27 July 2006 10:38
The first kiss of Simon and Kaylee was indeed a nice little moment, and this was my favorite line:
*though inside the words flying around her brain would make Jayne blush with pride..*
Friday, 28 July 2006 05:22
Ahttp://www...gotta agree with Leiasky here, and say that there's so much more to do here;)

Still...this is some wonderfull stuff, Leighkohl! Definitely could see this setup...though I am glad Simon deviated from his norm and took the initiative in kissing Kaylee;D

BEB
Friday, 28 July 2006 13:31
Awww

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