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Runaway Part 5

Friday, November 3, 2006

Charlotte recieves some news that may shake things up for Mal and Co. Best to read from beginning. S/K, M/I.

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A/N: Okay so it has been a long while since I have posted anything on this story. So sorry, but I have been moving, switching positions in my job, going to school and visiting a lot of people, so real life has definitely gotten in the way! Here’s another installment! Hope you enjoy it, and comments are appreciated and welcomed!

Thanks to Leiasky for the beta!

Link: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12290>Runaway Part Four. All the other stories can be linked through here!

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Charlotte glanced down at the bag in her hands, pulling out the first frock. She shook her head as she took in the audacious pattern of the flowers that were splattered across the cheap fabric. Lifting it up to the light she held back a guffaw as she saw that the seams were loose and stretched threadbare. Sighing to herself, she took no further look as to what was in the bag and simply deposited it in the bottom drawer of the room's dresser, never to be thought of again. Catching a glance of herself in the small mirror above the dresser, Charlotte stared deeply into the features before her. A pang of guilt darkened the circles that had formed underneath her eyes from a restless night of sleep and her body boiled with the conflicting emotions that spread hotly through her veins. The faintest fluttering tickled the inside of her stomach, a phantom from months before, now it haunted her, stirring up the anger and resentment she desperately wished would fade away. Running her fingers across her lips for a second, she wondered to herself when she had become this person. Straightening her back, Charlotte raised her chin and turned from her image, not wanting to linger.

Smoothing the wrinkles from the sari fabric, Charlotte slipped on the one pair of shoes she owned and made her way up from the passenger dorms to the lounge. The infirmary caught her eye, it's bright white light shining like a beacon against the shabby decor that littered th

Comments
Friday, 03 November 2006 21:03
Aww ... why do I not feel ANY sadness for Charlotte? Oh of course, because she's a witch!

Well, being disowned couldn't have happened to a nicer girl.

I loved River's commments to her cousin about Kaylee being Simon's home ... but Simon, the boob, should have gotten off his pi gu and gone to see Kaylee in the engine room, instead of letting her stew!

Glad you're back posting!
Friday, 03 November 2006 21:17
>Well, being disowned couldn't have happened to a nicer girl.<
Poor Charlotte, oh that's right you're the founder of the I HATE CHARLOTTE CLUB! LOL

>but Simon, the boob, should have gotten off his pi gu and gone to see Kaylee in the engine room, instead of letting her stew!<
The com message interrupted his musings, and I think Simon, knowing himself, would decide very precisely just what words he would use with Kaylee and Charlotte before venturing out to talk with either one of them.


Friday, 03 November 2006 22:10
Yeah, I don't like Charlotte. Stuck up little princess needs to have a face to metal meeting with one of Kaylee's wrenches.

And Simon better put dear old cousin in her place soon or Kaylee make take a wrench to his skull too! laugh
Saturday, 04 November 2006 00:17
Whoa. Long time no see (err...read).

Seriously, WTF is wrong with Simon? He obviously noticed that the ladies were having a difference - hell, his CRAZY SISTER noticed, and she often is found staring at the gorram ceiling - but he didn't do a thing about it, other than sit around feeling guilty. I just don't get how he never has a learning curve in the woman department. In a way I feel sorry for him - being one with a rather slow curve myself - but after a while you just wanna beat him with the clue bat.

And I just love passive-aggressive Mal. He'll never say something directly, but you just keep wondering when he's going to up and shoot someone...

Oh, and sign me up for the "I Hate Charlotte" club. I would not be displeased if she suffered a small "accident". You know, one of those "that large chunk of engine just came out of nowhere!" type things.
Saturday, 04 November 2006 02:34
I don't like Charlotte, but I feel we should give her time to adjust to the situation before we condemn her completely.
Please don't kill me.
Saturday, 04 November 2006 03:00
Y'know, sooner or later Kaylee's going to spot-weld Charlotte to the floor, and it isn't like Charlotte won't have asked for it.
Saturday, 04 November 2006 04:55
Not a Charlotte fan (surprise), but come on...how did Simon behave when he first showed up. Give the girl a chance to see what life in the black is like, and I'm sure she'll begin to adjust (not saying she won't be a witch). After all, she is a Tam.
Saturday, 04 November 2006 05:10
I am normally not a fan of OC's but this one is kinda interasting. Charlotte might not be "nice" to the crew but she is interasting and very curious where this goes. Hope we don't have to wait as long for the next chapter
Saturday, 04 November 2006 21:06
OMG I love the Charlotte debate going here! Personally, I love Charlotte, but I also love Saffron so I guess it is in my nature to appreciate the not so nice girls.
>Y'know, sooner or later Kaylee's going to spot-weld Charlotte to the floor, and it isn't like Charlotte won't have asked for it.<
>tkid LOL! That image just made me burst in to giggles!
>Oh, and sign me up for the "I Hate Charlotte" club.<
>MG I am sure you are not alone!

thanks to all for the great responses! I hope to post more often now that my life has slowed down!

Sunday, 05 November 2006 06:37
Probably tried to say this back during the comments for Chapter 3 (stupid fei hua computer systems...), but Charlotte's someone who's just learned the true nature of the society she once flourished in.

I mean, Simon was stoic and reserved, but it was mainly out of a protective measure for himself and others. Charlotte is haugthy, arrogant, shallow and HUMAN! Plus, let's not forget the one time she tries to do what she wants, her father interferes and drives off her boyfriend before forcing Charlotte to put her baby up for adoption.

Really, I am a tad bit more forgiving of Charlotte. I definitely would have loved to see flashbacks of Inara and Simon to their lives shortly before their individual arrivals on Serenity. Bet we would moan and lash out at them for being all kinds of uptight;)

BEB
Monday, 06 November 2006 13:28
I am glad to see another chapter of this great story, I was afraid that you wouldn't finish it, though I know how real life gets in the way sometimes.

I am glad that it is finally sinking in to Charlotte's head that she can no longer have the high-society life she was used to.

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