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Runaway Part 1

Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Mal and Simon bump into someone from Simon's past while on the run.

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A/N: Here's the follow up! You find out who the mystery woman is...and she may not be who you expected. Hope you like it and thanks to Leiasky for beta-ing!

Link to http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12109>Runaway: Teaser

Disclaimer: Not mine, just writing for fun.

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“Simon!?“

Simon stared back at the young woman in front of him, confused and shocked at the sight of her. He hadn’t seen Charlotte in years, not since his descent into lunacy , as his father had so aptly put it. The family had distanced themselves from him as he furthered his efforts to save his sister from the Academy and his cousin had dutifully followed suit. It was shocking to see her so far away from the Core, she had been one of the belles of the Osiran social scene. He could never have imagined her leaving the folds and comfort of that society to be wed on Persephone, a second rate planet that held nothing of the frivolities of life that she had so enjoyed when he had known her. Recovering first from the shock of seeing her and secondly in such a state of distress, Simon answered back with only her name, “Charlotte?!”

"Oh Simon!"

She flew into Simon’s arms, slamming her body against his so fiercely that the crown atop her head shook as the baubles of jade and pearls smacked into one another, jingling and slapping Simon in the face as she buried her head against his shoulder. Her tears returned full force as she clung desperately to him, her chest heaving as the sobs racked her body. Simon’s arms were captured underneath her own willowy ones, squeezing him so tightly he could only pat the middle of her back with his one hand, the other lying limply while he struggled to keep the grip on his gun, which took great effort.

Mal was standing back, watching the spectacle with concern before clearing his throat to garner the couple's attention, “Hate to break up this little reunion but umm... Running. Capture. Shooting. I think it’s best we move on now, doc.”

Charlotte released her hold on he

Comments
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 16:25
I love this! It's a fresh look at a very fun story idea. I can't wait to see where you go with it.

And I LOVE that you fooled people into thinking Charlotte was one of Simon's lost, or left behind, loves.

But I can see already I'm not going to like Charlotte. . . she's got the attitude of someone born to wealth and expecting everything to be handed to them on a silver platter. . .

I do hope someone manages to knock her down a few pegs.
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 16:29
Am enjoying this and wondering just who Charlotte was supposed to marry and how much *goushi* the crew is going to get into by helping her out. I think Charlotte has an epiphany coming as well. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 17:22
This is going to be fun :)
Tuesday, 01 August 2006 17:23
I think Simon's going to be blwon away by this one...he's going to see a "copy" of himself meeting the crew, only this time he's on the other side of it. Quite enlightening, if he notices it.
RUBBERDUCK
Wednesday, 02 August 2006 04:56
The Duck approves. The Duck approves.

Great stuff, hope to see more.
Thursday, 03 August 2006 16:26
Oh...I really can't wait for the eventual verbal bar brawl that gonna pop up. I mean...Simon's was conceited and arrogant a lot of time early on in the series, but he mellowed out with learning about things. Charlotte (so wanna call her Charlie or Lotty :D) is gonna need a crash course fast if she has to stick around. Would be rather neat if it's Simon who opens the can of verbal whoopass;)

Oh...and I really wanna know why she decided to ditch her own wedding. I would guess at something like the hubby to be ain't her first choice...

BEB
Friday, 04 August 2006 11:53
Mal breaking through the door and helping to lead them away from the wedding even though Charlotte talked down to him speaks volumes to his character (though we all know what kind of character he has anyhow).

*spitting out his words with venomous exigency*
-Excellent word usage here

I like this story a lot, and look forward to reading more of it. I especially like how they just jacked Charlotte without finding out if or why she wasn't going to her own wedding.
Wednesday, 09 August 2006 04:26
This is gonna be good

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