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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Sixty-Five

Monday, April 10, 2006

Wash enjoys a dogfight, Johnny stares his legacy in the eye, Simon and Zoe go hunting, and Inara and Nyan Nyan . . . well . . .

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Sixty-Five

DELTA TEAM LEADER -29:18

The red blips on his screen cavorted and twisted like hallucinating fireflies as Wash’s face became locked in a permanent sneer. His laser capacitors had overheated twice now, forcing him to dump reactor coolant into their heat exchangers to keep them from exploding or melting a hole in the fuselage at an inopportune time. He hadn’t touched his missiles since the Bandits –four of them – had closed on him. They were just too close. So he had to slug it out with them in a classic dogfight, laser to laser, the aerospace equivalent of hand-to-hand combat.

The pack of drones that whizzed by was running on combat algorithm – he could tell by the way they flew. It was a sophisticated algorithm, and one he had learned to respect early on, but it was a machine code every bit as inflexible and uncreative as the protein sequencer in Serenity’s galley. The up-side to that was he was free to exploit that inflexibility in his flying. The down-side was the fact that the drones did not make the inaccurate and imprecise errors a human pilot did. All in all, he was just as glad that they were flying by program – his extensive “combat” experience in the arcades and consoles of combat flight sims was almost exclusively against machines.

The only difference here was that the machine could kill him, not just take his two bits.

With four-to-one odds it took an impressive amount of attention to his flight path to avoid the coherent lances and occasional mines that the drones threw at him. Of course the advantage was that he didn’t have to worry about hitting a friend, whereas twice now he had set up a pattern that had his foes scoring minor hits on each other. It was gratifying, if not decisive.

His own lasers had carved generous slices out of his opponents, but they were well-armored and sturdily built. It would be a battle of wits and skill that decided this contest. Bank, dive, climb, bank, roll, fire, juke, bank juke climb bank

Comments
Monday, 10 April 2006 18:15
Still in deadline hell, but the end is in sight. Had to grind this one out just to stay sane. Enjoy. I'll be in my bunk . . .

StA
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 April 2006 19:26
I love this story and was thrilled to see a new chapter! Thanks so much!!!
Wash's dogfight was so well done - I love Wash. Also, I like the way you write Inara (naughty girls! very funny twist). I usually don't warm up to Inara in fanfics but I am enjoying her in this story. And Zoe's take on Mal's mental health, not to mention Book's, was just priceless.
Thanks again!

Monday, 10 April 2006 19:34
Woohoo! Glad to see yet another wonderful chapter.

I'm really loving Wash's dogfight, but I can't help wondering if the stakes are going to be raised now that he's in the bonus round. I'm also very curious to see what Book has in mind for Shan Yu, and what Johnny has up his sleeve.

Oh, and the girl on girl action with Inara and Nyan Nyan--yeah. I'll be in my bunk too.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 April 2006 21:39
Yipee! I'm so excited you updated! I'll write a thousand letters to whoever you want - remind us who to write them to, to publish your book... you mentioned it in your last story i think...
2X2
Monday, 10 April 2006 21:39
I love the conversation between Inara and Nyan Nyan! It's so interesting to see Inara have to deal with a Companion's insights into her own emotions *G*... and even though I myself am female... the impending Inara/Nyan Nyan - totally hot! *G* I love Nyan Nyan, she's one of my favourite original characters, and I don't blame either of them for wanting to indulge *G*
Monday, 10 April 2006 23:24
Huh.... did not see that coming!

Another great chapter. Some good stuff with Zoe and Simon here!


Tuesday, 11 April 2006 05:00
Yep....you are definitely channelling Joss here, Screw. This is some mighty excellent stuff here and I hope the gang at Mutant Enemy, Fox (sad to say) and Universal tap ya to do any of the novels based on the Firefly/Serenity 'Verse...cuz this and your previous novella just knock my socks off!

And the Companion-on-Companion sex? You so rock! Even if you don't pull a smut level like some of your fellow Browncoat scribes, I still think you're gonna blow our socks off with the hotness:P

BEB

P.S. Alos have magnum amor (big love in the Latin...I think) for the Wash vs. drone dogfight and Simon/Zoe dialogue on the mental state of Mal and Book! So perfectly suited towards the BDHs.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 06:00
"Goddess"? Erm, isn't Inara a Buddhist?

Anyway.. great addition. I'd like have seen the merc's reaction to Wash taking out their drones, though.

Sigh, I should be glad for what I'm getting
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 13:25
Great stuff! Love Wash's dog-fight/gaming. He IS such a boy at heart. Interesting pair-up with Simon& Zoe too.
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 13:40
Yes, Inara is a Buddhist. But Buddhism isn't a monotheism, and they respect several goddess-cum-bohdisatvas, especially in the kind of Amitaba Buddhism ("Pure Land")that is practiced in most of China today. Indeed, many of the old Taoist folk-divinities were "converted" to being bodhisatvas in Buddhism the same way many Pagan gods were converted to sainthood in Christianity. A notable example is Kuan Yin, the Bodhisatva of Compassion (Caretas, again!) who was originally a Chinese fertility goddess. When Inara is thinking base and lustful thoughts, no doubt she frames them in a way that reflects her spiritual life, such as looking to the Goddess for sexual inspiration.

As far as the bounty hunters' reaction to Wash . . . stay tuned!

StA
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 14:23
Exceptional as always. Please ,please keep 'em coming.

Seriously, on the verge of begging here.
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 23:24
Mmmm, maximum marks as ever. Brilliant!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 04:15
Thanks for answering my pleas for a great treatment of Wash's dogfight. I am going to send this to my friend who is still deistraught over Wash's death in the BDM. Good luck on your other ventures, but please don't ever leave us!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 17:53
Welcome back, Bellona, I missed you . . .
WINTERHART
Wednesday, 19 April 2006 14:11
I've just caught up on the last 10 chapters or so, and have to say (as always) - Brilliant! I nearly cried with frustration while Book was being tortured...it was a fantastically written chapter.

This is a wonderful and exciting story, and although I don't always comment on-time, I'm always enjoying it. Thank you!

-Winterhart
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 April 2006 19:52
Seconded on the buying your published works!
Sunday, 23 April 2006 06:56
“You sure do grunt good for an educated man.”

See?!?! SEE??? Like I said in the last chapter, it's the voices!!! SO Zoe!

Also, the hotness of Wash-in-a-dogfight followed so quickly but the sheer lustyness of Inara/Nyan Nyan sex? Lovely. I may be a straight girl, but I can appreciate THAT!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 April 2006 02:47
Very useful comments - good to read http://spank.ath.cx
Friday, 12 May 2006 18:13
i should never have gone away for so long, i mighta missed this:
“I’m a humpin’ leaf on the gorram wind!...See how I humpin’ soar!”

b

ps. missed you too StA!!!
Monday, 23 May 2011 02:51
WOOOH!

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