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Good Intentions Part Three

Friday, April 7, 2006

More tears but a little humor thrown in! Mostly Simon/Kaylee, but some Mal/Inara too! Best to read Good Intentions Part One and Two first!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3464    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine, just writing for fun.

A/N: Okay, sorry, I lied. This is going to be a four parter, with a possible epilogue, we’ll see how you guys feel by the end!!! I really did have more to write than I thought I would!!! All the positive feedback just makes me so happy to write, thank you all!!! Hope you guys like this installment and PLEASE COMMENT!!!

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Kaylee slammed the door to her and Simon's room behind her, fearing she may have broken it in her rage. She moved Molly further back along her hip, shifting her child to the side as she locked the door.

Molly's tiny hands reached out to touch Kaylee's tear stained face, tilting her head to look at her mother.

"Mama sad?"

Kaylee's lip trembled as she nodded and answered her daughter truthfully, "Yes, Molly. Mama's sad."

New tears sprang forth as she stared down into the sweet face of her baby girl that looked and acted so much like Simon. She had his soft, dark hair, pale skin, and that silly grin that made Kaylee's heart flip. She was a quiet child unless she wanted something or somebody made her laugh. Same reserved, contemplative nature that her father had. Molly's eyes mirrored the same look that crept across Simon's face whenever he was concerned, that sweet, yearning need to make things better, causing Kaylee to stifle another sob. She didn’t want to upset her little girl any further.

Molly rested her head against Kaylee’s shoulder and slipped her hands back down to grasp behind her neck. Kaylee sat down on the bed, shifting Molly around her pregnant belly as the toddler let out a sigh, snuggling closer to her mother.

“No more sad, Mama.”

Kaylee kissed the top of her head, petting her soft curls, praying that the ache in her heart would just disappear.

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“Mei mei? It’s me, I’ve brought you both some food.”

Inara held the tray of protein mash with one hand, lod

Comments
Friday, 07 April 2006 21:27
Ohhh, very nice. The letter was so sweet and sad. Molly is so cute!

Looking forward to reading how Simon and Kalyee 'have it out' :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 07 April 2006 23:12
I *love* that letter and the idea of Simon rewriting it every coupld of months, awhttp://www...
~ misskitten
Saturday, 08 April 2006 02:09
The letter is so sweet *sniffle*

So, they're gonna have it out, and then make up, right? Cause after all that angst, you'd think it'd be a damn good make-up session, yeaaaah? *winks*
Saturday, 08 April 2006 03:33
Kinda surprised Kaylee doesn't want to come along with the crew (minus Inara)....she probably wants answers to who almost got them killed too:S

Still...can't wait for the next part and all the lovely angst that is waiting in the wings;)

BEB
Saturday, 08 April 2006 16:56
So cool, so cool. Makes me feel like I'm watching it all on a capture. Keep more comin' pleasd?
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 03:28
The letter was so sweet!
Monday, 15 May 2006 21:28
The whole re-writing the letter thing was lovely but I also feel the need to comment on this line...

"Hey, Zoe, how come I’ve never seen this Reina girl before?”

Zoe looked back thoughtfully, ” 'Cause we like her, Jayne.”

GENIUS!
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 17:53
*"Mama sad?"*

That would just freakin break my heart.

*”Gorram mind readers all over this ruttin’ ship.”*

LOL, great line.

*Zoe looked back thoughtfully, ” 'Cause we like her, Jayne.”*

Zoe has some of the best one liners.

That letter was powerful stuff.

Awwww, I am so glad she was there to see him off, though I suspect that what they are going to do might not go so smooth either.

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