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Good Intentions Part Two

Tuesday, April 4, 2006

Dealing with the aftermath and Kaylee is awake. Best to read Good Intentions Part One.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3366    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine, just writing for fun.

A/N: So sorry for the delay!!! My internet access was shut down for a whole week!!! I am quite certain the phone company is run by the devil. So this is going to be a three parter, guess I had more to write about than I thought! Hope you guys like it and I know it's a bit of a cliffhanger, but that only makes you guys want to read more!:D Next installment should be up in a couple of days, now that I have my internet back!!! Hope you guys like it!!! Please Comment!!!

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Jayne deposited Kaylee on the examination table gently and then leaned back against the counter as Simon checked over her vitals. He just crossed his arms and then shook his head as laughter began to bubble out of his mouth. Simon looked up from his ministrations and scowled as he waited for Jayne to express some vulgar quip.

“You really screwed the pooch this time, doc.”

Well that’s a new one- Simon thought. His scowl diminished as he contemplated what Jayne had said. Colorful as it was, Jayne had nailed it on the head. He was completely to blame, but he didn’t want to give in to it just yet, especially when it was Jayne pointing out the fact.

Jayne pushed himself away from the counter and stared down at Kaylee, “She’s gonna string ya up for this one.”

Simon kept himself focused on hooking Kaylee up to the monitor. Never taking his eyes off his work, he retorted, “All canine fornicating and lynching aside, I’d like to be left alone with my wife.”

Jayne sauntered out of the infirmary with a slight grin, calling back , “Good plan there, seein‘ as she might not be your wife much longer when she wakes . Best getchya time in while ya can.”

Simon eyed the scalpel that had been laying on the tray next to the exam table and then at Jayne’s back, but thought better of it as he let out a sigh.

Simon just stared down at Kaylee as she slept, still under the influence of the tranquilizer he had shot her with onl

Comments
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 21:02
Hoo boy...yeah, he's done it this time. But Zoe's right, a pregnant woman would be a liability in that situation. But Simon's also right about Kaylee's love for "her" ship...yeah, this is a tricky situation they're in.
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 21:22
Whoa. Simon's in for it now.

The conversations were great. Jayne being an ass like usual. Zoe coming to Simon was just perfect and she was right, Kaylee would have been a liability. I hope she realizes that before she does or says something she regrets. Because, I assume she and Simon will have it out at some point.

And that letter Inara has. Will she find a way to give it to Kaylee to temper her anger at why Simon did what he did?

That will be a very interesting read! Post again soon!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 21:40
Very great chapter, ooo, the trouble's just starting for poor Simon Tam. I agree with the rest, this is really gonna get interessting.
~ misskitten
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 23:26
And that letter Inara has. Will she find a way to give it to Kaylee to temper her anger at why Simon did what he did?

-It will be a factor in what is to come!

this is a tricky situation they're in.

-Very tricky but Simon may surprise you all.

the trouble's just starting for poor Simon Tam.

-There's a little trouble but lots of talking to come, and a very important decision in the future.

Thanks for commenting!!1 It always makes me write faster!:D

ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 00:46
Yep....Simon's gonna need all the skills he can muster to save his butt. I know Kaylee will eventually forgive him...once some soulsearching has been done and a lot of heated words exchanged. That;s the nature of Silee I find....

And I do wonder at what exact feelings are creeping back up for the Capt. when he's holding our favourite Companion....fantasy of little ones with raven hair and ice blue eyes perhap...;)

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 01:11
And I do wonder at what exact feelings are creeping back up for the Capt. when he's holding our favourite Companion....fantasy of little ones with raven hair and ice blue eyes perhap...;)

-Who says those feelings are about Inara, or even that they are romantic feelings.........
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 01:11
okay weird, I'm signed in but it's posting as anon?! -Leighkohl
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 03:20
Simon eyed the scalpel that had been laying on the tray next to the exam table and then at Jayne’s back, but thought better of it as he let out a sigh.

LMAO
Monday, 15 May 2006 21:21
Dead man walking!
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 16:41
*Simon eyed the scalpel that had been laying on the tray next to the exam table and then at Jayne’s back, but thought better of it as he let out a sigh.*

I'll bet Simon is pretty good at throwing those things, and accurate too.

Sucks for Simon, but he did bring it upon himself. Hopefully someone can make Kaylee realize that it was for the best.
Thursday, 10 December 2009 04:06
ok a lot more emotion than i was expecting but good

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