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Thursday, March 27, 2003

Set after "That Old Yeh Shen Story." All Kaylee and Simon want is a little privacy...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5466    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: I have discovered that I really, really, really enjoy writing fluffy, smutty, Simon/Kaylee. Thanks to my betas, particularly Dangermom and Nita, and special thanks to all the LJ gang for encouragement as I went!

Privacy
by Tara O'Shea

Day One

Kaylee was good with her hands.

Always had been. Every since she was knee high to a grasshopper, her clever fingers had known almost all on their own how things fit together. It took her a while before she learned that not everybody was pleased with her taking things apart, no matter how patiently she explained that she could put them back together again—and better than they were before. She was lucky; her daddy had seen her gift, and put it to good use.

She'd been twelve when he pulled her out of school and kept her on in his workshop full time. She'd learned everything there was to know about engines by the time her mamma decided it was time she learned how to be a girl. Momma had shown her how to cook and clean, mend and wash, but the best parts had been when she'd managed to get her youngest daughter out of her grimy canvas coveralls and into actual dresses. As much time as Kaylee spent with the boys at work, she discovered she quite liked spending time with them where they actually looked at her and saw a girl and not another brother, cousin, or pal.

By fourteen, she could disassemble and reassemble an aught-six grav boot in the pitch dark and had gotten felt up by Michael O'Brien at summerfair. As far as she was concerned, it was the best of both worlds. It had also gotten her turned over her daddy's knee and unable to sit comfortably for a week, but she'd figured it was pretty worth it at the time.

Right now, she was intent on taking Simon apart.

She'd gotten his vest off, and the first two buttons of his crisp white shirt were undone. His breath hitched in his throat as her teeth grazed his collarbone, and her clever fingers had his shirt rucked up in the back and were explori

Comments
Thursday, 27 March 2003 18:54
--Author's Note: I have discovered that I really, really, really enjoy writing fluffy, smutty, Simon/Kaylee.--

And I find I really, really, really, really enjoy reading it.

Oh, this is wonderfully written. It further re-enforces my belief that if Simon was real, he would be a god among men... well, more likely women… hopefully just me. I loved the part where River walked in on the both of them. Perfect.
Friday, 28 March 2003 03:16
Best! Fic! Ever!

And I, for all I count in the 'verse, would elevate this far above fluff. This is genuine insight! Kaylee's voice is dead-on. It is perfect, truly. It is Kaylee actually talking to us.

Further, it's Simon and Book and Wash actually talking to us. Dead on.

And who coined the term "eyegasm"? Cos I had one of those, too.

Jesus-gawd. Wondermous.
Sunday, 30 March 2003 00:57
I finally had a chance to read this--sick day!--and wow. Just wow.

Internal consistency, all the character exchanges were bang on, and I loved this bit "Kaylee just looked at him, and saw Simon" and the last line was brill and perfect.

Thanks much.

Sunday, 30 March 2003 06:31
As ever, Tara, Just. Plain. Luverly! Not much to add beyond that, except that I'm looking forward to your next foray into the 'verse. Thank you for this!
Wednesday, 09 April 2003 03:54
Great story! Couldn't stop laughing when I read the part with Simon and Wash!
Wednesday, 23 April 2003 03:49
So much great stuff in this fic that if I had to choose a favorite line/moment, I wouldn't be able to. Each character is expertly written (love Jayne), but best of all -- Simon/Kaylee are so adorable! You've effectively made me a `shipper for them. I wish they could have had a relationship *exactly* like this on the show.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 May 2003 02:57
Another Wonderful! A D*mn shame they have to do a checklist to get it on, but that was perfect!

Write, LJC, write!
Wednesday, 14 January 2004 21:08
"And a marriage floor, and a marriage chair... Really, I'm just a big fan of any marriage surface."

Ok I had to stop reading for five minutes while the shuddering laughs died away from that one ;)

You have made my day, truly :) fantastic fic

and yes--eyegasms--SO real
KAYLEE19
Saturday, 17 January 2004 23:34
This is so great! Everything about it felt real, I could hear all the characters talking. Simon and Kaylee are my absolute favorite, please keep writing about them.
Monday, 19 July 2004 15:37
Absolutly the best fic ever!!!!
Congradulations! U are a wonderfulk writer! It was as if kaylee and simon were right there in front of us with such writing! Bravo!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 March 2005 06:28
htat was fantastic fan fic and it took then long enough to get it on lol
i thoguht it was realy good
jazz
Thursday, 13 October 2005 06:14
Very good fanfic. In fact if Firefly hadnt gotten cancelled I believe they would have probably written a script like this.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 October 2005 03:46
Shiny. I love Kaylee, and am warming up to Simon, especially when he gets such hot lines as these.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 02:06
wo de ma. that was awesome. god, i love wash...damn you joss for killing him off! SHINY story!!! who's excited for tomorrow!!!! i have a gorram exam beforehand, though...go se. anyway KEEP WRITING!!
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 23:04
Perfect. So perfect. From the interruptions (which were starting to frustrate even me!) to Simon's conversation with Book and Wash, then to Kaylee's with Inara...so perfect. You've got their voices down so well!

I hope to find you still writing S/K because you've certainly got one heck of a talent for it!
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 00:47
I am fairly new here and working my way thru all sorts of stories but I think this one might be my favorite so far.....the "voices" are perfect....


"And a marriage floor, and a marriage chair... Really, I'm just a big fan of any marriage surface."

I laughed til I CRIED...and poor Simon's "I'm in hell"...it makes me scared to keep trying my hand at this with so many wonderful authors to be compared to...thanks for sharing

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