Author's Note: I have discovered that I really, really, really enjoy writing fluffy, smutty, Simon/Kaylee. Thanks to my betas, particularly Dangermom and Nita, and special thanks to all the LJ gang for encouragement as I went!
Privacy
by Tara O'Shea
Day One
Kaylee was good with her hands.
Always had been. Every since she was knee high to a grasshopper, her clever fingers had known almost all on their own how things fit together. It took her a while before she learned that not everybody was pleased with her taking things apart, no matter how patiently she explained that she could put them back together again—and better than they were before. She was lucky; her daddy had seen her gift, and put it to good use.
She'd been twelve when he pulled her out of school and kept her on in his workshop full time. She'd learned everything there was to know about engines by the time her mamma decided it was time she learned how to be a girl. Momma had shown her how to cook and clean, mend and wash, but the best parts had been when she'd managed to get her youngest daughter out of her grimy canvas coveralls and into actual dresses. As much time as Kaylee spent with the boys at work, she discovered she quite liked spending time with them where they actually looked at her and saw a girl and not another brother, cousin, or pal.
By fourteen, she could disassemble and reassemble an aught-six grav boot in the pitch dark and had gotten felt up by Michael O'Brien at summerfair. As far as she was concerned, it was the best of both worlds. It had also gotten her turned over her daddy's knee and unable to sit comfortably for a week, but she'd figured it was pretty worth it at the time.
Right now, she was intent on taking Simon apart.
She'd gotten his vest off, and the first two buttons of his crisp white shirt were undone. His breath hitched in his throat as her teeth grazed his collarbone, and her clever fingers had his shirt rucked up in the back and were explori
And I find I really, really, really, really enjoy reading it.
Oh, this is wonderfully written. It further re-enforces my belief that if Simon was real, he would be a god among men... well, more likely women… hopefully just me. I loved the part where River walked in on the both of them. Perfect.
And I, for all I count in the 'verse, would elevate this far above fluff. This is genuine insight! Kaylee's voice is dead-on. It is perfect, truly. It is Kaylee actually talking to us.
Further, it's Simon and Book and Wash actually talking to us. Dead on.
And who coined the term "eyegasm"? Cos I had one of those, too.
Jesus-gawd. Wondermous.
Internal consistency, all the character exchanges were bang on, and I loved this bit "Kaylee just looked at him, and saw Simon" and the last line was brill and perfect.
Thanks much.
Write, LJC, write!
Ok I had to stop reading for five minutes while the shuddering laughs died away from that one ;)
You have made my day, truly :) fantastic fic
and yes--eyegasms--SO real
Congradulations! U are a wonderfulk writer! It was as if kaylee and simon were right there in front of us with such writing! Bravo!
i thoguht it was realy good
jazz
I hope to find you still writing S/K because you've certainly got one heck of a talent for it!
"And a marriage floor, and a marriage chair... Really, I'm just a big fan of any marriage surface."
I laughed til I CRIED...and poor Simon's "I'm in hell"...it makes me scared to keep trying my hand at this with so many wonderful authors to be compared to...thanks for sharing
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