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The Way Chapter Three

Thursday, March 30, 2006

Jayne goes home, Mal gets an offer and Kaylee thinks that she's getting what she wants. Please tell me what you think of the story thus far.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2511    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Joss Whedon et al own the characters, ‘verse and everything else in them. I’m only playing with his toys and not making a single bit of credit off this.

Rating: Teen and up

Summary: finding your way can take you to all kinds of places. Post-BDM.

One other thing: Jayne uses the clothesline and head drop at the heist on Lilac, not the Maidenhead. Sorry for that.



Chapter three

The town of Bountiful was the founding planetary fathers’ idea of a good idea. Optimism had run high in settling that town on Harvest. They posted advertisements all over the Core worlds picturing green pastures with fat cows. Come live the old west, the ads had said. Live the life of a pioneer, but with full amenities. With a name like Harvest, how could you fail?

Families flocked, bringing much sought after cash and hope. They landed, built homes, barns and the town proper. And the planetary fathers were happy.

Until the glich that no terraformer bothered to mention could happen. Seemed the planet went through some sort of seismic activity every four-hundred years or so that rendered it dry. Cows thinned and died, their bleached bones littering the landscape around Bountiful. Some folks left, others felt themselves made of tougher stuff and plugged on. When rain did come, there was jubilation and excitement, but with the ground dust, the rain only made mud. And mud was just too hard to til.

The effect was a dying town and townsfolk that were tough and ornery.

Jayne’s mother was no exception.

With her head titled down, Louise Emma Jayne rolled her eyes up into the shopkeeper’s face. “Now, Bill, we both know what’s goin on here. Let’s not pretend.”

Bill the shopkeeper kept silent.

“You think that jus’ cause I’m in the mourning way that you think you can take monetary advantage of a poor old lady.”

“Now, Emma, don’t be that way. Times are tough all over. Ask anyone from the Rim an’ they’ll tell you.”

Emma crossed her arms. “I have.” She nodded over her rig

Comments
2X2
Thursday, 30 March 2006 01:03
Oh Jayne...

I like it...everybody's feelin' all sorts of mixed up, and you're portraying it well... good work!
Thursday, 30 March 2006 02:31
ROTFL! Simon is still such an easy mark. Very funny little exchange.

Interesting, though, was River's comment about pieces not fitting. Was she referring to Simon and Kaylee or someone/thing else....?

Interesting Mal contemplation about what to do with Jayne too.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 02:34
I've really enjoyed this story so far. Can't wait for the rescue!
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:56
Oohh...Jayne's in trouble. Round up the troops;)

And I have to back Leiasky here....is River hinting at some approaching angst for Simon and Kaylee or something else...something Raynish perhaps?

BEB
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:57
I loved Jayne's effortless intimidation of Bill, with nary a word spoken, and his ma's use of that fact. Can see who he inherited his devious mind from.

River's little hint about Kaylee and Simon not fitting echoed my thoughts exactly, but it ain't no secret that I don't like the Doc. Man's like tits on a bull.

Now, make with the Jayne-rescuing...
MERCENARYSONG
Thursday, 30 March 2006 06:41
exceptional. Enjoying this immensely. I'm not a Jaylee fan so I hope that foreshadowing isn't jaylee related but in any event you're awesome. keep writing.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 11:22
Love it that Mal and crew are off to do a timely rescue with more thrilling heroics! Just hope Jayne's arrest isn't a set up. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 30 March 2006 11:54
I've been enjoying this series and this is another great chapter. All the different interactions between the crew are good.

Hope they rescue Jayne and that he and Kaylee get together.
Friday, 12 May 2006 01:31
Love teasing Simon.

Oh no for Jayne. Must run to see the next part! Awesomeness!

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