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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Sixty-Four

Tuesday, March 28, 2006

A number of people wake up with headaches.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Sixty-Four

HAMMERSTRIKE TEAM REMNANT –25:44

“Ta mah de!” Rel said, when he first realized that his eyes were open and that he was alive and conscious. Then the pain hit.

His head hurt. His chest hurt. Three of his four limbs hurt. His jaw felt like he’d been kicked by a mule. Hard. But nothing seemed broken . . . only hurt. The wild girl who had successfully defeated a vastly superior force – in bare feet – had left him alive. Looking around at his comrades, he couldn’t swear that she had extended them the same courtesy.

Sometimes you just had to appreciate the little things in life. Ma always said that.

Rel groaned and tried to get to his feet, and settled for getting to his knees. He steadied himself for a moment, took several painful breaths, and then forced himself up. A moment later he was leaning against a wall, looking at the scene of destruction. There were bodies all over, and all of them were wearing the same uniform as him. That had to be bad. He glanced over to the entrance of the Engine Room and knew without any real proof that there was no longer a conscious guard in there. That girl – River Tam, he remembered – had been through there. For all he knew she was still in there.

Rel looked around some more, more to kill time and come to his senses than anything else, and he considered:

In two months time he had gotten his ass righteously kicked by a girl no bigger than his mother. If she was that close, and chanced to encounter him once again, a third ass kicking was likely. Rel was not an educated man – literacy had come to him slow and painfully in the last two months – but he was wise enough to know the outcome of such a conflict. So he did what any seasoned criminal and all of his family members would do in a similar situation: he got the hell away from there as fast as his sore feet could carry him.

He looked down at his comrades for a moment, realizing that honor and chivalry and team spirit dictated he not leave a wou

Comments
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 04:01
I'm in catalog hell right now, but thought I'd squeeze one more out before my deadline.

StA
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 04:37
Good things come to those who refresh ... and refresh ... and refresh ... and refresh ....

:)

Gotta love Jayne.
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 05:09
Gotta love Jayne and his magnificent plans;)

Oh, StA....once again you make me feel all manner of shame that I could ever thing of writing a fic, as this chapter just adds to the reasons why lowly schmucks like me can't compete...but I'll still try;)

BEB
WOONSOCKET
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 17:12
I was wondering about Jayne talking the talk; it sounded like Mal's words coming out of his mouth and I had to check the name twice to make sure it wasn't a typo...

until he fessed up to it meaning nothing. "Cunning plan" indeed.

And Rel gets a love interest!!! And its River!!!!rotflmao!!!
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 19:48
What can I say, the guy's clearly lucky that way ;)


Great writin' as usual, StA!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 01:54
yipee! so happy you updated! i love the way you write thoughts - you had Rel perfect!

"And her sib is annoying as a crotch full o’sand."

ahahaha!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 18:08
rel and river up a tree, kay eye ess ess...

b
Sunday, 23 April 2006 06:40
Oh Jayne! *sigh* Jayne, Jayne, Jayne Jayne Jayne. YAY!

Gotta say: the reason I LOVE (adore. WORSHIP) this fic is that you have their voices down so well. Mal says things that Mal would say. I can see the little smirk on Adam Baldwin's face at the line "Cunning plan, hey?" Ok, also, yes, I adore Johnny. Stop feeling sorry for yourself and get to work, kid!!!

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