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Good Intentions, Part One

Monday, March 27, 2006

There's trouble, some one gets drugged, and lives are on the line.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3761    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me, just writing for fun

A/N: So here’s a new little series, something completely different from my other ones. This takes place about five years after the BDM. I’m trying something new, so please let me know what you think!! I have not tried actiony angst but, well, here it goes! This is going to be a two parter, I think! Hope you guys like it and PLEASE comment!!!

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"I am not going to argue with you anymore Kaylee, this is how it has to be."

Simon stared down his wife, who was clutching their two year old daughter in her arms around her pregnant belly, tears streaming down her cheeks.

"I won't leave y'all to die!"

Simon sighed as he reached back to hold onto the counter behind him, steadying himself. His heart was breaking as he stared at her tear stained face. The fierce loyalty present struck him to the core and made him love her a little more. All he wanted to do was wrap her up in his arms, comfort her and his child. He wanted to promise her that everything would be just fine, but there was no chance of that happening now.

"Kaylee, please, you have to listen to me. This is not just another job gone wrong. They will run us down. These are hardened criminals, and they will not be forgiving if we lose this fight. You have to leave with River and Inara, you have to save yourselves and Molly. I will not allow those animals to get a hold of any of you-"

"Simon! I can't do it! Maybe we can rewire the press regulator-"

Simon bridged the gap between them, grasping her shoulders to garner her attention away from fool hardy ideas and face reality.

"It's too late Kaylee, they've gained on us and we can't outrun them. The only way we are going to get through this is to have River launch the shuttle the minute we break atmo. We have the goods, they will follow us. We're just lucky they don't have a shuttle themselves. They want the cargo and no complications. If you are here,

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 23:38
WOW! Good suspense. That kinda flyin' really wakes a girl up.

Cliomuse
Monday, 27 March 2006 23:52
whoa, nice action.

Kaylee's gonna be one pissed off momma and everyone better get out of her way when SHE wakes up!

Looking forward to the next installment.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 00:16
okay i'm hooked. what happens next?!

~kaynara
ANA
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 00:24
Yowza! That was...quite a ride.

Yep, Kaylee's gonna be boiling mad, and no two ways about it. Simon had better start running for cover now. Kaylee never once really lost her temper on the show, and you know what happens when people like her reach their breaking point. Nope, not pretty at all.

Simon's got an unfair advantage, however. She loves him.
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 00:28
This installment was really good. I look forward to more.

Also -- I think Molly Tam is such a cute name for a Simon/Kaylee baby. Most names that are chosen for fanfic babies I just disagree with. So, as a namenerd, kudos.
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 01:27
ooohhhhhweeeee, Kaylee's gonna be PISSED. i can't wait til the next one!
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 03:47
Have to agree with the crowd here and say that Simon better find religion cuz only God will have mercy on him....Kaylee won't. Definitely an icy calm "You drugged me.....you actually drugged me? You used one of your gorram smoothers on me when for all we knew I could have been needed to fix something" line of rage-filled remarks.

Oh....yeah...gotta love Firefly angst! Great job Leighkohl! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

BEB

P.S. Who the hell was chasing them!?! Reavers? Cuz your brief description sounds rather like a Reaver ship than anything the Alliance would field....
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 09:50
Absolutely brilliant! Go River, GO! You did the impossible and that makes you mighty. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 14:32
Great stuff !!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 16:20
Ooooo, Kaylee's gonna be one pissed of hormonial imbalanced girl... Great chapter :D
~ misskitten
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 17:32
Wow, this was a great chapter!

Kaylee's not going to be at all happy, I'm willing to bet.

I can't wait for the next installment!
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 00:55
Thanks guys! I was trying something different so I am so glad everyone likes what is goign on! As to who is chasing them, I will go into a little detail later, just know that they are really bad guys. Angst, angst, angst on the way, and of course some very pissed off people(or person to be exact!:D).
Tuesday, 04 April 2006 15:27
Oooh, Kaylee is gonna be MAD at Simon. I just hope she can remember that his intentions really were good. He was just being a boob again.

This one's off to a great start, can't wait for more!
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 03:14
Oh, Simon's in trouble
Monday, 15 May 2006 21:13
Ok I admit it...I'm back-reading.

I just had Simon/Kaylee overload and this kinda slipped off my radar.

I am suitably chastised!
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 14:24
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-OW!!! that was some damn hot flyin' there, river girl!!!

b
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 16:20
*Simon pulled back the tranq gun from Kaylee's neck as the drugs took immediate effect.*

Yikes, that's not gonna be a fun one to talk about later. Someone might get to sleep on the couch for a spell.

*She pushed Jayne, who had been cradling Vera in his arms and blocking her path, out of the way.*

Any scene in which 90 lb River pushes Jayne around is golden in my book.

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