Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Piece of Your Action (pt 2)

Sunday, March 26, 2006

Okay, this is Part two of the lovely little story you guys have just read. River Revellations, 3am wake up calls, and Good Morning Silee!

Again, this is NC-17 guys, so be warned, and enjoy the ensuing naughtiness. :)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3271    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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River settled onto the plush stool in Inara's shuttle while Inara grabbed her brush and some hairpins. As Inara started brushing the young girl's hair, she tried to conjure up the best way to begin the conversation.

"I know Simon asked you to do this." River relaxed into the feeling of having her hair brushed. "Too embarrassed to tell me himself. I still don't understand."

"Sweetie, I didn't just invite you in here for Simon's benefit, you know I enjoy spending time with you." Inara was so gentle on River's hair that she barely felt the tangles catch on the bristles of the brush. "And, honestly, if you had questions about sex, you should have come to me. I'm not easily embarrassed, and I'm willing to share everything I know. I've even talked Kaylee through a lot of questions in the past."

"Simon's funny when he's embarrassed. Red-faced and wide-eyed. Can't hardly speak. He's such a boob." River went about folding squares of Origami paper into various ornate shapes. She was a bit nervous, and her hands were starting to get restless.

Inara smiled in amusement. "Your brother is amusing when he's embarrassed. But you can't get your questions answered if he's just sitting there stuttering." She set down the brush and started pulling strands of River's hair up, pinning them in elaborate twists to her head.

"Don't understand. I feel. Body lit up in fire. Flames that are never quenched. Don't know how. Parts interlocking, need parts I don't have." A tear spilled down River's cheek. She didn’t understand her body. She did, felt, and said things that she can't explain. When she started feeling arousal, she just tried to believe it was imagined, or she was feeling someone else's emotions. She was almost eighteen now, and the need growing inside her was becoming unbearable.

Inara finished with River's hair and moved so she was sitting in front of her. She gently wiped the tear from River's cheek, taking a moment to choose her words.

"River, once a girl reaches a certain age, her body awakens to

Comments
Sunday, 26 March 2006 19:48
Ohh, nicely handled with River and Inara. River wants Jayne...heh, can't wait to see Simon's reaction to that! Kaylee's gonna have to tie him to his bunk and keep him well sexed to forget all about THAT little development.

Simon dropped...something...in the middle of the night...who's gonna find it? Hee

Breakfast in bed, cream-puffs....hee

Well done, looking forward to your next one!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 March 2006 20:15
THUD. River and Inara....I think...I...yep. I believe I just lost most of the usable parts of my brain.

MG
Sunday, 26 March 2006 23:10
nice! I like how Inara dealt with River!
Sunday, 26 March 2006 23:39
Um....."GUH" anyone?

Wow...this is some hot shit....but excellent hot shit! I like how Inara is mentoring River, since she was teaching trainees between the series end and the film. Plus, I think Inara is better suited towards helping River since she's been trained to view sex differently than either Zoe or Kaylee would.

BEB
Monday, 27 March 2006 00:05
> I like how Inara is mentoring River, since she was teaching trainees between the series end and the film.

I hadn't actually thought about that, but you're right :) it does tie into her training other girls. And I always thought Inara was more suited to help River discover herself physically, because, as you said, she views sex more openly and reverently than anyone else on the ship.
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 02:41
Shiny
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 21:14
...

I'll be in my bunk
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 03:07
How is it possible that I never commented on this one? I love this fic!

Musta been drunk or something...

*goes to make sure she didn't miss any more*
Thursday, 06 July 2006 15:06
Awwww poor River having to struggle with puberty and not understanding it. Bringing up Inara's feelings for Mal was a nice touch.

Your description of colors and scents is very vivid, I like it. :)

Inara showing River how to pleasure herself = TRIPLE RUTTIN GUH !!!!!

The 3 a.m. scene = my favorite way to wake up (who wouldn't like it, honestly?)

I am very particular about Rayne, but from what I have read of your works, I trust that you will make it enjoyable.

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