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WHere the River Flows pt 2 - Whispers In the Dark

Wednesday, May 3, 2006

Hey guys! Part 2 of my Where the River Flows chapters. River wakes up, Jayne's in trouble, old enemies come back. Sorry, Silee fans, I love you and I'm one of you, but there's only Rayne sexin' in this chapter! Promise there will DEFINITELY be Silee lovin' in the epilogue. Got one more chapter to write before that! Again, guys, this is NC-17, so be warned, and enjoy the ensuing naughtiness!

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"Jayne, you should get some rest." Simon looked up from the tests he'd run on his still comatose sister to look at the roughened man. Kaylee had been bringing both men their meals upon request, and Jayne was now more than half finished with the bottle of sake he'd insisted Kaylee bring him.

"Ain't leavin', Doc. Said I wouldn't and I won't." He looked at River and sneered in an effort to keep control of his emotions. "Girl needs me."

Simon finished the last of the small meal Kaylee had brought, quietly placing his empty plate on top of Jayne's, which was barely touched. Simon checked the IV drip he'd given River, making sure the vitamins were timed correctly with the fluids to keep her from becoming dehydrated or malnutritioned.

It had been over ten hours since River had fallen unconscious after a particularly horrifying hallucination. Jayne had been with her when it happened. He was simultaneously cursing himself mentally for not understanding her, and cursing River for being so gorram cryptic that no one could understand a one of her moonbrain thoughts. Girl couldn't be blunt even if it meant savin' her life.

Jayne used all his will to keep from yelling at Simon to hurry up and figure out what was wrong with River. He knew the doc was doing everything he could, but his heart was, for the first time in a very long while, gripped with fear at being unable to help River. He cleared his throat and kept his eyes on River.

"It's pretty ruttin' weird. I ain't ever been worried about no one's life but my own." He held River's long slender hand in his own large palms. "But for some gorram reason I'm..." Jayne let out a ragged breath, unable to say something.

"Scared?" Simon looked back at Jayne, looking at every hint of emotion that ran through his face.

"I ain't fuckin' scared!" Jayne barked at Simon for a moment, then growled to himself before calming down. "Sorry. I ain't one to admit I got somethin' that near resembles a heart."

"You love her, Jayne. I know you well enough t

Comments
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 04:32
Oh DAMN, you had to leave it there? Eeek...fix it!

Jayne looking after River was so sweet. *happy sigh*
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 16:38
Aww, I missed the Simon/Kaylee smut I've come to expect from you. *sniffle*

And what the gui is wrong with River?! My god, you've written something with a plot? Say it ain't so! :P
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 18:28
I've been waiting for days for part 2 of this and you leave me hanging like that? Cruel... too cruel... Fix it quick. Please.
Drakb
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 23:01
I hope Jayne comes out of this in one piece and somebody shoots those HOB guys for once
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 04 May 2006 00:56
Poor River!

You've captured her character so well, her reactions and her emotions. I love where this story is going, throwing in some drama and suspense to break up the smut. Wonderful!

Keep it up!

~Wanmei (too lazy to log in)~
Thursday, 04 May 2006 02:01
Yay, I'm glad you guys are likin' the plot (sorry Leiasky, I love the sexin' too, and I promise I'll get back to it as soon as possible.) Right now I'm writing my 3rd part to this story, and after that an epilogue, then back to full blown smut! with a few plot twists here and there!
Friday, 05 May 2006 07:58
Oh shit....the big drama's here. Just hope River's wrong about not being able to save Jayne in time. Gotta make sure our Rayne stays true;)

Great job, JanaFae!

BEB
Tuesday, 11 July 2006 16:01
"I ain't fuckin' scared!" Jayne barked at Simon for a moment, then growled to himself before calming down. "Sorry. I ain't one to admit I got somethin' that near resembles a heart."

Great Jayne characterization.

Yay for using the Bluehands, I can't wait to see what happens with them.

*Jayne had to admit he was more than a little pleased at having gotten River to curse more lately.*

BWAHAHAHA

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