Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Too Young To Fall In Love

Thursday, April 6, 2006

Hey again guys, this is still S/K but MOST of it is Rayne (sorry for the detour, couldn't help myself, and trust me, it's hot!). There is definite sexin' here, especially between River and Jayne (this is when they finally get that chance in the spare shuttle mentioned in Don't Go Away Mad). Again, this is NC-17 guys, so be warned and enjoy the ensuing naughtiness!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5132    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Serenity was due to land back on Persephone in five hours and River was anxious. She had arranged a secret meeting with Jayne for later on during the day. She shivered slightly, remembering the way she had kissed and touched her on her birthday. She recovered a bit and spoke into the com.

"We should hit atmo in five hours, Captain."

"That's good lil Albatross, breakfast is in ten minutes, so get in here."

River smiled and made sure everything would be alright while she was eating before getting out of her seat and running gracefully to the galley. She grinned as she saw Kaylee and her brother enter the room on time.

"Woke up early this morning. Finished in time to eat with the crew." Simon rolled his eyes while Kaylee giggled. They sat down beside River and started serving themselves.

Mal noticed Jayne putting a particularly large portion of food on his plate. "Jayne, there any reason why you're eating more than the rest of us get?" Jayne glanced quickly at River before responding, sending a chill down her spine.

"Gotta bulk up on energy. Got a lot o' hard work ahead of me today."

"Jayne, you're not hittin' planet side when we land. In fact, I recall you specifically requesting to stay on ship. So, I'm not certain as to what kind of work you're to be doin'."

Kaylee grinned before Jayne could answer. "Oh, Cap'n, Jayne's prolly gonna be workin' all kinds of furious alone in his bunk."

The entire crew laughed heartily, except Jayne who just smirked, and River who was looking at him with a secret smile on her face.

"Good job, lil Kaylee. 'Bout time someone was as crude to Jayne as he is to us." Mal raised his chopsticks in a salute to Kaylee before finishing what was left on his plate.

Jayne just sneered for a moment before shoveling the rest of his breakfast into his mouth and retreating to his bunk.

*****

River waited until she saw Kaylee and Simon close the door to the shower room. Then, as silently as she could, she slipped into the infirm

Comments
Thursday, 06 April 2006 06:23
Oh. Good. God. Of course the K/S stuff was hot...that strawberry scene...GUH.

But damn, I didn't think anyone could make me even remotely enjoy Jayne smut, but you managed it! Well done!

Can't wait to see what happens when Simon finds out that the man-ape has 'violated' his sister. Bwahahaha

Kaylee better be ready with her body and booze to distract him!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 April 2006 06:27
Guh.

Wow.

Bet Kaylee won't look at a strawberry the same way again.

And damn was the Rayne HOT!
Thursday, 06 April 2006 06:54
Is it me, or is Simon in possession of a Jekyll/Hyde personality, cuz the boy has some kinky tricks up his starched shirtsleeve;)

And I was hoping for some longer Rayne smut:( Tell me there's gonna be some long, drawn-out, GUH-inducing goodness between our favourite merc and elvish assassin (cuz Summer does remind me of a LOTR elf)...please?

BEB
Thursday, 06 April 2006 07:14
There's definitely more Rayne ahead, in fact in the follow up I'm writing currently it... starts with Rayne sexin' lol damn I'm a freaky kid lol
Thursday, 06 April 2006 07:54
Ta ma de....

I'll be in my bunk. For a long, long time.
This is just--wow.
Thursday, 06 April 2006 13:37
Jebus, that was HOT. I mean, start-to-finish. DAMN. Can't wait for more.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 April 2006 13:49
I'm nearly an EXCLUSIVE Jaylee shipper, and I have to tell you... that River/Jayne stuff was hot. The first I've read that hasn't given me the creeps, in fact. If you write more, I'll read it.
Thursday, 06 April 2006 22:46
Squee, anoher Jaylee shipper thinking maybe Kaylee won't mind if Jayne get sa little River action now and again. Awesome word pictures and great imagery. Love the strawberries, and you have really captured River's voice in a way I didnt think anyone could. I cant wait to read more.
Thursday, 13 April 2006 15:37
Strawberries are hot
Thursday, 06 July 2006 18:33
Well, I made a lot of comments and the site ate them, but I really liked this chapter as well. The River/Jayne ruttin' was good, the dagger on the leg was sexy, and the strawberries were indeed very sexy.

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